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Martin Michlmayr
7648027275 Typo fixes 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
85577d597a Misc copy editing: fix some typos, grammar, and formatting errors 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
74899d7d1c Fix quotation marks so they show up in the text 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
6ba2ff285f Add missing label 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
0c48d8fdd3 Fix broken LaTeX ref commands 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
f7211a9f8a Fix broken LaTeX section commands 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3ed7c26e43 Merge branch 'cle-edits', which brings in Donald's copy-edit changes.
There were minor conflicts in gpl-lgpl.tex.
2014-03-24 06:56:42 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
14e09b0b18 This should not be plural, and an shouldn't be in the quotes. 2014-03-24 05:56:18 -04:00
donaldr3
a577a77eb4 people should email licensing@fsf.org, not compliance@fsf.org 2014-03-21 19:35:10 -04:00
donaldr3
9ab67f3125 the 2014-03-21 19:23:04 -04:00
donaldr3
43cc44ae29 the 2014-03-21 19:17:23 -04:00
donaldr3
c6063eca3c the everywhere 2014-03-21 19:15:20 -04:00
donaldr3
5545101088 the gpl 2014-03-21 19:10:17 -04:00
donaldr3
c2415647a5 the gpl 2014-03-21 19:07:34 -04:00
donaldr3
484ca88b81 remove extra words 2014-03-21 18:40:50 -04:00
donaldr3
d826095d06 multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 18:37:33 -04:00
donaldr3
1aa98048c1 remove repeated phrase 2014-03-21 18:32:42 -04:00
donaldr3
f58920bbe5 the gpl 2014-03-21 18:19:55 -04:00
donaldr3
33e47ace60 multiple edits 2014-03-21 18:00:09 -04:00
donaldr3
a4feaf97bf multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 17:50:54 -04:00
donaldr3
c6183da7fd restructured sentence 2014-03-21 17:48:04 -04:00
donaldr3
30efea6579 the gpl 2014-03-21 17:34:08 -04:00
donaldr3
1070277ed6 the gpl 2014-03-21 17:29:18 -04:00
donaldr3
b776c58280 add of the 2014-03-21 17:26:43 -04:00
donaldr3
814b5ce01c administrative 2014-03-21 17:22:43 -04:00
donaldr3
e1f07949fe the gpl 2014-03-21 17:17:19 -04:00
donaldr3
20fba8b654 removed extra 'software' 2014-03-21 17:10:46 -04:00
donaldr3
58beece8fd multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 17:04:41 -04:00
donaldr3
f167d0387a multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 16:55:06 -04:00
donaldr3
4753f14a82 re-distributors 2014-03-21 16:51:57 -04:00
donaldr3
1dd7d7b4cc the gpl and restriction/condition 2014-03-21 16:50:11 -04:00
donaldr3
30389cad6c multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 16:45:47 -04:00
donaldr3
fd3be34dc4 have/having 2014-03-21 16:32:55 -04:00
donaldr3
7ce3980bd6 multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 16:10:21 -04:00
donaldr3
3e526a2589 multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 16:05:43 -04:00
donaldr3
a7f901e4a3 other/otherwise 2014-03-21 16:04:18 -04:00
donaldr3
0b2aa866a7 remove extra 'the' 2014-03-21 16:02:59 -04:00
donaldr3
04bc20eba7 removed extra 'can' 2014-03-21 16:01:39 -04:00
donaldr3
e1ef7578f7 a/an 2014-03-21 16:01:16 -04:00
donaldr3
ec363feb97 removed extraneous clause 2014-03-21 16:00:52 -04:00
donaldr3
8310c8947a removed extra sentence 2014-03-21 16:00:19 -04:00
donaldr3
f7ff1ac0d5 removed extra word 'which' 2014-03-21 15:59:41 -04:00
donaldr3
d55d2787c8 removed 'that' 2014-03-21 15:56:37 -04:00
donaldr3
e92e89ae55 chose/choose 2014-03-21 15:33:08 -04:00
donaldr3
f0efbf5fa8 chose/choose 2014-03-21 15:32:40 -04:00
donaldr3
592a6f08de the are ultimate/ there are ultimately 2014-03-21 15:31:49 -04:00
donaldr3
531f142207 the gpl 2014-03-21 15:14:35 -04:00
donaldr3
c007884497 the gpl 2014-03-21 15:12:38 -04:00
donaldr3
4098beb707 an/a 2014-03-21 15:11:09 -04:00
donaldr3
83b69e1f5c added missing for 2014-03-21 15:10:05 -04:00
donaldr3
0e5e24093f the gpl 2014-03-21 15:07:37 -04:00
donaldr3
2880f4eebb control to controls 2014-03-21 14:56:43 -04:00
donaldr3
9bbbda9847 mechanism to mechanisms 2014-03-21 14:39:37 -04:00
donaldr3
2774ae23d2 removed extraneous 'of' 2014-03-21 14:17:10 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1c10eb02eb Change paragraph to refer to next parts. 2014-03-21 12:55:10 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f34606819a Various formatting fixes. 2014-03-21 12:55:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
58f65dff21 These should all be subsection. 2014-03-21 12:55:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8486e56cab Various temp changes to handle printing it this weekend. 2014-03-21 12:55:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f9bea67be7 Wordsmith paragraph and add label it now references. 2014-03-21 12:54:32 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6cbb2d530d Wordsmith paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:54:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
31118ec3c1 Removed some specific company names from here, particularly because the
information is somewhat out of date.
2014-03-21 12:54:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
be829a5f2a m-dash 2014-03-21 12:54:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4e4919167e Proprietary relicensing comment. 2014-03-21 12:54:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ab4861b27e Spell check. 2014-03-21 12:54:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
730a079cc7 Comment out these sections. 2014-03-21 12:54:15 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
56382c650a Fix to what really happened. 2014-03-21 12:54:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3224b6aef3 GPLv3§14. 2014-03-21 12:54:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0c96a3bb7d Affero GPL section, not doing this justice now, but this is good enough to
print for Monday's class.
2014-03-21 12:54:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8bd2bbc58d Wrote and merged text for GPLv3§12 2014-03-21 12:53:56 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6f718b34bb Correct ' signs in these places. 2014-03-21 12:53:55 -04:00
Tony Sebro
a394bce20f Made final edits to Implied Patent License section 2014-03-21 12:53:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
859cfccca7 Resolve all undefined reference. 2014-03-21 12:53:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
296b733311 Do not really need a section break here. 2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
71b8aa67c9 I still love to write texit. 2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
539cc5e81b Rewrite the entire Patent section.
Much of this text, pasted from various different rationale documents, deals
with issues that either changed in later drafts, or is focused on various
minutia about the Microsoft/Novell deal that seems in retrospect rather
unimportant for many reasons.

Hopefully what I've cut down to is the bare essentials of what's needed to
explain the patent section of GPLv3 to a newbie.  I suspect that I'll want
later to go over this and add more material or reword things further.

I've added a few FIXME-LATER's for that reason.
2014-03-21 12:53:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cea2bde2d5 Finish section. 2014-03-21 12:53:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9683b6ed0f Move one paragraph around, and revise another. 2014-03-21 12:53:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8e06bdea08 Finish Section 9. 2014-03-21 12:53:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3ec650424 Termination section rewrite. 2014-03-21 12:53:38 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d7bff4baa5 Comment out this text for now. 2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
96735e78d0 Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs. 2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bb29c91417 Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later. 2014-03-21 12:53:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dc7f0fea56 Rewrite text on GPLv3§7. 2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cfde3638b1 Redraft paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
168594f3c2 Rename section 2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7584fb1122 I think this text won't be useful. 2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8cd5c5e373 Rewrite paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:53:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
06178c3fb2 Move this section on License Compatibility here. 2014-03-21 12:53:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
110f9ece93 Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions. 2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c28313b014 Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions. 2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
27ec9cecb9 Finish up Installation Information section. 2014-03-21 12:53:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3b878270e4 Change paragraph to refer to next parts. 2014-03-20 22:10:38 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d0821c856b Various formatting fixes. 2014-03-20 22:09:36 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e2e1335aea These should all be subsection. 2014-03-20 22:05:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
05d02bfff4 Various temp changes to handle printing it this weekend. 2014-03-20 22:01:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8c5f9f38d1 Wordsmith paragraph and add label it now references. 2014-03-20 21:21:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
595c64c158 Wordsmith paragraph. 2014-03-20 21:14:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a7ffbb9ee5 Removed some specific company names from here, particularly because the
information is somewhat out of date.
2014-03-20 21:00:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8e5a381028 m-dash 2014-03-20 20:57:13 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0117799b69 Proprietary relicensing comment. 2014-03-20 20:57:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
16917f85a2 Spell check. 2014-03-20 20:56:36 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ceccb45e25 Comment out these sections. 2014-03-20 20:49:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b494e0cc66 Fix to what really happened. 2014-03-20 20:49:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
596878284d GPLv3§14. 2014-03-20 20:48:15 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f8a9199284 Affero GPL section, not doing this justice now, but this is good enough to
print for Monday's class.
2014-03-20 20:46:27 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3878521bbf Wrote and merged text for GPLv3§12 2014-03-20 20:39:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f491e35882 Correct ' signs in these places. 2014-03-20 20:36:14 -04:00
Tony Sebro
b5b0571a6a Made final edits to Implied Patent License section 2014-03-20 20:35:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9dc94d5869 Resolve all undefined reference. 2014-03-20 20:34:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4f266baa97 Do not really need a section break here. 2014-03-20 20:31:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0ffabed0e0 I still love to write texit. 2014-03-20 20:30:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5c1a943df9 Rewrite the entire Patent section.
Much of this text, pasted from various different rationale documents, deals
with issues that either changed in later drafts, or is focused on various
minutia about the Microsoft/Novell deal that seems in retrospect rather
unimportant for many reasons.

Hopefully what I've cut down to is the bare essentials of what's needed to
explain the patent section of GPLv3 to a newbie.  I suspect that I'll want
later to go over this and add more material or reword things further.

I've added a few FIXME-LATER's for that reason.
2014-03-20 20:30:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7940504216 Finish section. 2014-03-20 18:57:14 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a5bf35174c Move one paragraph around, and revise another. 2014-03-20 18:55:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d09f5f3e2a Finish Section 9. 2014-03-20 18:52:01 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c6a0465a65 Termination section rewrite. 2014-03-20 18:50:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4f31de2b98 Comment out this text for now. 2014-03-20 18:28:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
82a504a115 Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs. 2014-03-20 18:28:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5963e0d131 Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later. 2014-03-20 18:26:42 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a03479ec1b Rewrite text on GPLv3§7. 2014-03-20 18:25:39 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
017c6ae1b5 Redraft paragraph. 2014-03-20 18:18:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
751992a932 Rename section 2014-03-20 18:18:37 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a024a36067 I think this text won't be useful. 2014-03-20 18:18:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c4ced9c93f Rewrite paragraph. 2014-03-20 18:16:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
98ae3aaac2 Move this section on License Compatibility here. 2014-03-20 18:16:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
263dd1e086 Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions. 2014-03-20 18:15:11 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2aa2613611 Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions. 2014-03-20 18:10:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
678c1d8099 Finish up Installation Information section. 2014-03-20 18:08:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b00ddaa698 Rewrite material on Installation Information, put it into sections. 2014-03-20 17:59:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3e528a31c Various changes to make all that Magnuson-Moss verbiage useful to the tutorial. 2014-03-20 17:46:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10244bee14 Purely formatting changes. 2014-03-20 17:38:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
aa15f936ce Fontana noted that I edited this poorly the first time,
likely due in my haste to make a funny commit message:

<fontana> bkuhn: I think there's an editing problem in that change
<bkuhn> fontana: I was showing you the commit message more than the content
<bkuhn> are you saying I made an editing erro[r]?
<fontana> yes
2014-03-20 17:36:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b17d0710ac Reword paragraph. 2014-03-20 17:34:09 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cee78c87ef This change does the job that needs to be done to this ¶ for this tutorial. 2014-03-20 17:29:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
579704541d Reword some of this and remove FIXME. 2014-03-20 17:27:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dd9e082222 Rewrote paragraph. 2014-03-20 17:24:41 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4623ebe2ec Reword this paragraph that was just moved here. 2014-03-20 17:24:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca2d66685 Move this paragraph to the right place. 2014-03-20 17:23:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a83760dcc7 Rewrote this paragraph, removing much which wasn't useful. 2014-03-20 17:19:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f53db9025a Remove FIXME and add subsection 2014-03-20 16:42:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7390b7c0f9 This text was so old (from the earliest drafts) that it was not particularly useful. 2014-03-20 16:23:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2145ca8186 This text is no longer useful. 2014-03-20 16:22:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6d5ca098a1 Reword these two paragraphs. 2014-03-20 15:40:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5111178260 Rewrite paragraph. 2014-03-20 15:35:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8faf96d5e5 Rewrite this paragraph. 2014-03-20 15:25:35 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dac68d1410 This material was accidentally pasted down with GPLv3§7 stuff,
but it's for GPLv3§6.
2014-03-20 15:21:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9de90679bb Rewrite this paragraph on GPLv3§6(d) 2014-03-20 15:16:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a5079818d4 Rewrite description of GPLv3~\S6(d). 2014-03-20 15:11:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b7dfcb2372 Add missing word. 2014-03-20 14:33:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9bd27fcffe Rewrote text for the final parts of GPLv3§5 and early parts of GPLv3§6. 2014-03-20 14:30:32 -04:00