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Andrew Engelbrecht
daced43610 move long parenthetical text out of short sentence
it's easier to read this way.
2014-12-20 19:22:44 -05:00
Andrew Engelbrecht
5879dd3344 correct literal meaning of phrase
GPL protected code-bases don't demand industry trust, modern industry
trusts GPL protected code-bases.
2014-12-20 18:49:36 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b0801a2b8a Clarify sentence.
Make this sentence a bit clearer.
2014-12-19 19:09:01 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e01c6bf303 Remove spurious line.
This line was carried over as a paste from a previous version of the
paragraph above it, and is now no longer needed.
2014-12-17 23:34:50 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
48e517cb83 Additional published work.
This publish work was also referenced in the old commit logs already,
but now that we have a list in the work itself, it can also be listed
here.
2014-12-17 23:26:26 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
22fe0956db Add hyperlinks to remixed published works.
Now that a list of published works is part of the document proper, it is
reasonably practicable to add hyperlinks to those works.
2014-12-17 23:21:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2ea19b71d4 Remove incomplete lists of authors entirely.
The lists of authors in each part has been continually out of date and
incomplete.  There are multiple examples, here are a few:

  * In September 2005, John Sullivan made improvements and was not placed on
    the Authors lists until I did so in a March 2014 commit.

  * In March 2014, Martin Michlmayr submitted many patches, but was not
    placed on the Authors lists until I did so in an April 2014 commit.

There is no easy way to keep these Authors lists current, and they aren't
necessary under CC-BY-SA-4.0 anyway, so I herein remove the Authors lists.
Additionally, previous commit added "published sources" in each part, which
is more static and easier to keep up to date and provides similar
information.
2014-12-17 19:52:15 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3605394f30 List published works & link to Git logs.
References and details regarding these published works from which some
text was incorporated already appeared in the commit logs in great
detail.  The information, already fully available in the Guide's Git
logs in full compliance with CC-BY-SA-4.0 §3(a)(1-2), now appears in
summary form additionally in the compiled PDF/HTML/Postscript output.
2014-12-17 18:33:10 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
312718cda0 it's is 2014-11-16 10:38:12 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
a5fa6ca556 2 paras in a row start with However, 2014-11-16 10:38:12 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
b35e89a8d8 more powerful interest*s* implicitly allied 2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
a867743eb3 para prohibit*s* anyone 2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
784976f1e3 consistent singular 2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
38329c1b5a "an set" 2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
126d4fc041 cap The in middle of sentence 2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
b8ec5dbbe9 it indicate*s* 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
5f18dfd82f add needed connecting word/punctuation 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
4b25ade520 two "Furthermore..." sentences in a row 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
e52a3d32dc relate sections -> related sections 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
5084f8b60f disparate not desperate views 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
057263d799 "would sometimes allowing distributors" 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
26c0a26169 "designed as part to permit" -> "designed to permit" 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
706e29388f consistent plural examples 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
5bc731e260 "includes with particular examples" drop "with" 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
95ff20c420 "rather bulk term" -> "rather bulky term" 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
9641e72df0 consistent fn follows punctuation 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
37bdf9cadd typos/extra words 2014-11-16 10:35:50 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
d3f9715bce "because GPLv2~\S2(b)" with nothing following doesn't work in discussion of that section, removed 2014-11-16 10:35:50 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
fcb21b4a38 "does grants such permission" 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
468946040b "the Maryland" 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
dd20a395b7 not all cc sharealike licenses are copyleft, so be specific
automatic relicensing is an exaggeration
cc by-sa case is even more nuanced, briefly mention in fn
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
652ff19285 ultimately is superfluous, fix typo 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
2a390dd465 "other or additional" redundant 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
241bdebac0 all four freedoms are necessary 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
e665db106e yet again, software not the giver 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
4dfdaa4fac software != granting actor again 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
913a5f4940 programs are not actors 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
abff2d8c4a incorrect plural 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
e449a1c3ab "successfully benefit" is redundant 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
fc0e9f723e "successful reader" an odd phrase and high bar for literacy 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d2e67f88c3 Spell check and correction.
Seems there were a lot of correctly spelled words missing from the
LocalWords lists as well.
2014-11-13 13:05:33 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
652c240896 Grammar and wording fix.
I think this sentence was improperly merged together with another one in
a previous commit and therefore needed correction.
2014-11-13 12:53:48 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
954f35615d Replace ’ with '.
The unicode ’ was introduced by the pasted text mention in the previous
commits.  While I believe LaTeX can be configured to accept Unicode
quote equivalents, it seems simpler to me merely to replace the
character with an appropriate version that LaTeX expects in this
situation by default.
2014-11-13 12:48:25 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9f34658440 Integrate pasted text regarding LGPL.
Much of the pasted text here was useful.  However, some of the claims
were broad reaching, I've reigned those in.  (e.g., saying "Taken
together, these provisions mean:" was a bit strong).

Also, in that specific spot, the conclusions made in the text were
described as applying to LGPLv2.1, but are clearly conclusions about
LGPLv3.  I've corrected that herein.

Finally, I had to write a bunch of next text to make the pasted text
work, and also added one FIXME for later of where things could be
improved further.
2014-11-13 12:25:13 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
895d387cc7 Add label for discussion of GPLv2§3(b). 2014-11-13 12:24:39 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e5669e4779 Correct \begin and \end{itemize} spelling. 2014-11-13 11:34:33 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d8d666d5da Pasted sentence usable as is.
I simply combined this pasted sentence with the previous paragraph; I
think it probably works as-is.
2014-11-13 10:57:50 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
065a88d180 Incorporate pasted text re: AGPLv3/GPLv3 combos.
This text was mostly useful as is.  However, it failed to make a key
point I've often made: that the combinations created by comingling
AGPLv3'd code with GPLv3'd code may be difficult to disentangle, and
thus in practice, it may turn out that such a combination effectively
must be licensed as a whole under AGPLv3, even if technically some
copyrights included therein are GPLv3'd.

In practice, this nuance is only a technical barrier, since complying
fully with AGPLv3 automatically complies with GPLv3.
2014-11-13 10:54:37 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
65179995e9 Comment out text that may or may not be useful.
I'm not sure this text is actually useful, so I've commented it out.
2014-11-13 10:52:45 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c3815b0689 Integrate pasted introductory text for GPLv3§11.
This text was (on the whole) useful as introductory text to this
tutorial's existing extensive section on GPLv3§11.

The example, however, belonged further down in the section, so I've
placed it there.
2014-11-13 10:50:57 -05:00