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		|  | @ -4857,9 +4857,10 @@ found that for higher-end hardware, the profit made from proprietary | |||
| software licensing fees is negligible. The real profit is in the hardware, | ||||
| but it is essential that software be stable, reliable and dependable, and | ||||
| the users be allowed to have unfettered access to it. Free Software, and | ||||
| GPL'd software in particular (because IBM can be assured that proprietary | ||||
| versions of the same software will not exist to compete on their hardware) | ||||
| is the right choice. | ||||
| GPL’d software in particular, is the right choice. For instance IBM can be | ||||
| assured that proprietary versions of the their software will not exist to | ||||
| compete on their hardware. | ||||
| 
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| 
 | ||||
| For example, charging a ``convenience fee'' for Free Software, | ||||
| when set at a reasonable price (around \$60 or so), can produce some | ||||
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