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Bradley M. Kuhn
ed8ed30fab Wordsmith this sentence. 2014-11-09 14:05:26 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0a37731b72 Rewrote U-Boot Installation section.
My primary goal here was to put the text into a consistent voice, and
convert the text to a more flowing narrative rather than a step-by-step
list.

In a few places, I added commentary on the process where it seemed
appropriate, but I strove to keep that minimal.

Finally, labels to some unlabeled sections of gpl-lgpl.tex were needed
for back-references used in my rewrite.
2014-11-09 13:57:14 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a45f702c2a Formatting fixes for copyright notices. 2014-11-09 11:25:45 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1d48b4ae25 Rewrite introduction to U-Boot Installation.
Includes some additional detail from the instructions themselves.
2014-11-09 11:20:49 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
3d2bd4a725 Add "U-Boot Installation" sec w/ netcat suggestion 2014-11-09 11:16:46 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
35947f81c5 Merge after rebase against master & new addition.
My rewrite of the intro needed merging.
2014-11-09 10:21:20 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
65644adce4 Rewrite introduction to U-Boot Installation.
Includes some additional detail from the instructions themselves.
2014-11-09 10:17:58 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
a85626f9d9 Add "U-Boot Installation" sec w/ netcat suggestion 2014-11-09 07:51:09 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
3da9449e68 Add BusyBox output/kernel log; update study FIXME 2014-11-08 12:16:45 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
2a2b848f9d Fix typos/grammar in "U-Boot Compilation" sec on 2014-11-07 16:58:26 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
cc9b426c50 Clarify last paragraph of "Root Filesystem..." sec 2014-11-07 12:55:49 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d8b232e011 Fix broken \href links.
Discovered these while watching the weblogs for the HTML version
published on copyleft.org.
2014-11-07 12:52:38 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6494bf2dfb Add missing label. HT denver (who noticed it). 2014-11-07 11:34:59 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
62c0fe86a6 Fix more typos in "Root Filesystem..." section 2014-11-07 11:11:41 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
09a1218f8d Fix some typos in "Root Filesystem..." section 2014-11-07 11:03:21 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
105da6758b Fix typos in "Consumer Purchase and Unboxing" sec 2014-11-07 10:54:25 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
4bf096baa2 Fix a couple typos in case study intro paragraph 2014-11-07 10:50:14 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
a94763abe4 Fix minor typo in first case study paragraph 2014-11-07 10:44:58 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0491736fcc Change Suggested by karen. 2014-11-07 10:24:09 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
34c53d92ee Wrap these lines a bit. 2014-11-07 10:23:15 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
41ab698d2f Correct formatting error: s/hellip/ldots/g. 2014-11-07 10:14:04 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0eb677d632 I think \verb has trouble in footnotes.
It gave a LaTeX error so I changed dpkg to just be in quotes.
2014-11-07 10:13:36 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b5035383c6 Add intro paragraph. 2014-11-07 10:08:13 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f17465ba61 Summarize minor annoyances and wrap up. 2014-11-07 10:06:21 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
33b39cda78 Rewrite firmware comparison section. 2014-11-07 09:56:54 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0b9e6e7e28 Comment out U-Boot Installation section for now. 2014-11-07 09:50:06 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
93dc1669ca Begin rewrite of U-Boot installation section. 2014-11-07 09:49:50 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b8fce5d22d Installation sections follow compilation sections 2014-11-07 09:48:57 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
674c24aab4 Rewrite of discussion about U-Boot build. 2014-11-07 09:45:44 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
14256d55bb Completed rewrite of install portion. 2014-11-07 09:27:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
57b58fe21a Complete section on main build. 2014-11-07 09:20:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5d8c372377 Add another lesson learned. 2014-11-07 09:13:14 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6de4a36a46 Rework discussion of untar and build. 2014-11-07 09:09:46 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d9558037d9 After last commit, FIXME is now addressed. 2014-11-07 08:52:55 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5da1514eca Remove old text vestiges & end para with : 2014-11-07 08:52:22 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
07bed2fdbf Host system requirements & instruction specificity
Include a lesson learned for it, too.
2014-11-07 08:51:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
31220d4762 Discussion of included README & its lesson learned
Included also is a code listing of mounting the iso, and the like, which
required use of a new LaTeX package.
2014-11-07 08:39:24 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6063938804 Typo fix. 2014-11-07 08:14:58 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2978c96197 FIXME: I'm not keeping up with \tutorialpartsplit 2014-11-07 08:08:15 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1837849952 Discuss CCS CD included in package.
This yielded a lesson learned, so that is herein added as well.

A new reference was also added for the discussion of GPLv2§3(a).
2014-11-07 08:07:25 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4381b16b5f Begin section explaining purchasing on open market 2014-11-07 07:53:12 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
22ac76ad23 Add footnote describing how CCS reviews were done. 2014-11-07 07:43:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7e4ce7b710 Rework & remove some text from final paragraph
This is now possible since the longer introduction material is
available.
2014-11-07 07:39:59 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed205b4f61 Write out "CCS" when first mentioned in chapter.
Also, add FIXME for when more material is available to link to.
2014-11-07 07:38:12 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
fbbc18c7f6 Write new introductory section of this paragraph . 2014-11-07 07:35:19 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
72f50f68ea Move ThinkPenguin CCS case study to first one.
The original text for this case study was developed as the final
chapter, as sort of a "you heard about the rest, now try the best"
approach.  However, I think we want to put this one first.  "Hope before
despair" is perhaps a better attitude?

The diff on this one didn't come out so clean, so it's a bit difficult
to see that I'm just moving  a big block of text up.

I diffed it against a version of this file, from:
  commit 2f2e5f9e4c on 2014-10-15 22:14:45 -0400

that was before work began on this chapter, and the diff was relatively
clean.
2014-11-07 07:07:19 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b46d1bc16f Correction to formatting on copyright notices. 2014-11-06 21:30:53 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
23c7fd7449 URLs should always use \url{URL}, not \verb0URL0
I just decided this should be done even when the URLs are fake ones in
example.{com,org}.
2014-11-06 17:02:23 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
467a23152a Copyright notice updates.
Joshua Gay made contributions to all the files earlier in 2014 (see git
log) which were copyrighted by the FSF, so FSF's copyright needs
refreshed to include this year.

Denver recently added a section to the enforcement-case-studies.tex, so
his copyright notice needs to go there and at the top file.

I made changes to enforcement-case-studies.tex on top of Denver's.

Also, remove commented-out copyright notices -- the ones in the actual
text are now primary and should be maintained directly.
2014-11-06 16:59:48 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
87a9a059d4 A few temporary formatting hacks.
Put \verb0_0 around _'s and use \url{} for the url.
2014-11-06 08:25:55 -05:00