Fix some typos in "Root Filesystem..." section

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Denver Gingerich 2014-11-07 11:03:21 -05:00
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@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ In other words, the first ``script'' that investigator ran in building
testing this CCS candidate was the above, which ran on the investigator's own
brain --- like a script of a play. Less glibly, instructions written in
English are particularly necessary for parts of the build and installation
process that cannot require some amount of actual intelligence to complete.
process that require some amount of actual intelligence to complete.
In this case, the investigator was able to determine the requirements for the
host system to use when constructing the firmware for the embedded device.
@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ instructions are more abundant and give more detail.
These instructions are more general than typical. Often, top-level build
instructions will specifically name a host distribution to use, such as
``Debian 7 installed on a amd64 system with the following packages
``Debian 7 installed on an amd64 system with the following packages
installed''. If the build will not complete on any other system,
instructions should have such details. However, in this case, the CCS can
build on a wide range of distributions, and thus no specific distribution was
@ -395,7 +395,7 @@ specified.
\label{thinkpenguin-specific-host-system}
In this specific case, the developers of the libreCMC project (on which the
TPE-NWIFIROUTER is based) have clearly made effort to ensure the CCS builds
TPE-NWIFIROUTER is based) have clearly made an effort to ensure the CCS builds
on a variety of host systems. The investigator was in fact dubious upon
seeing these instructions, since finicky embedded build processes usually
require a very specific host system. Even in this case, a