Joshua Wells
07912cb5fc
Fix broken link
2014-12-20 18:34:44 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b0801a2b8a
Clarify sentence.
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Make this sentence a bit clearer.
2014-12-19 19:09:01 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2ea19b71d4
Remove incomplete lists of authors entirely.
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The lists of authors in each part has been continually out of date and
incomplete. There are multiple examples, here are a few:
* In September 2005, John Sullivan made improvements and was not placed on
the Authors lists until I did so in a March 2014 commit.
* In March 2014, Martin Michlmayr submitted many patches, but was not
placed on the Authors lists until I did so in an April 2014 commit.
There is no easy way to keep these Authors lists current, and they aren't
necessary under CC-BY-SA-4.0 anyway, so I herein remove the Authors lists.
Additionally, previous commit added "published sources" in each part, which
is more static and easier to keep up to date and provides similar
information.
2014-12-17 19:52:15 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3605394f30
List published works & link to Git logs.
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References and details regarding these published works from which some
text was incorporated already appeared in the commit logs in great
detail. The information, already fully available in the Guide's Git
logs in full compliance with CC-BY-SA-4.0 §3(a)(1-2), now appears in
summary form additionally in the compiled PDF/HTML/Postscript output.
2014-12-17 18:33:10 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
58a88e5cd8
Denver should be listed in authors section.
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Denver wrote much of the ThinkPenguin CCS chapter and should be
so-credited as an author, not just merely in the copyright notice.
2014-11-13 13:31:19 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
82831c9b81
Integrate this text and rewrite to make it work.
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Also creates some label for references back.
2014-11-11 11:40:38 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
41c72f36e8
Slightly reword.
2014-11-09 17:56:35 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
febf4dd8cd
Additional LocalWords that speller should accept.
2014-11-09 17:23:27 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7b025e18aa
Full copyedit pass of ThinkPenguin chapter.
2014-11-09 17:21:19 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
675f66f5f3
Correct formatting on code listings.
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The indention is coming through as non-breaking spaces in the HTML
output, which is not correct.
2014-11-09 16:44:00 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
68421306b9
Properly include reference.
2014-11-09 15:41:03 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
04a297b360
Correct \texttt{} commands.
2014-11-09 15:40:56 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2ab078f9ce
Corrected directive.
2014-11-09 15:30:20 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0967aed577
Additional lesson learned.
2014-11-09 14:06:44 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c2c5402f8f
Additional minor annoyances & summary for section.
2014-11-09 14:05:48 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed8ed30fab
Wordsmith this sentence.
2014-11-09 14:05:26 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0a37731b72
Rewrote U-Boot Installation section.
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My primary goal here was to put the text into a consistent voice, and
convert the text to a more flowing narrative rather than a step-by-step
list.
In a few places, I added commentary on the process where it seemed
appropriate, but I strove to keep that minimal.
Finally, labels to some unlabeled sections of gpl-lgpl.tex were needed
for back-references used in my rewrite.
2014-11-09 13:57:14 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a45f702c2a
Formatting fixes for copyright notices.
2014-11-09 11:25:45 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1d48b4ae25
Rewrite introduction to U-Boot Installation.
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Includes some additional detail from the instructions themselves.
2014-11-09 11:20:49 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
3d2bd4a725
Add "U-Boot Installation" sec w/ netcat suggestion
2014-11-09 11:16:46 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
35947f81c5
Merge after rebase against master & new addition.
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My rewrite of the intro needed merging.
2014-11-09 10:21:20 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
65644adce4
Rewrite introduction to U-Boot Installation.
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Includes some additional detail from the instructions themselves.
2014-11-09 10:17:58 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
a85626f9d9
Add "U-Boot Installation" sec w/ netcat suggestion
2014-11-09 07:51:09 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
3da9449e68
Add BusyBox output/kernel log; update study FIXME
2014-11-08 12:16:45 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
2a2b848f9d
Fix typos/grammar in "U-Boot Compilation" sec on
2014-11-07 16:58:26 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
cc9b426c50
Clarify last paragraph of "Root Filesystem..." sec
2014-11-07 12:55:49 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d8b232e011
Fix broken \href links.
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Discovered these while watching the weblogs for the HTML version
published on copyleft.org.
2014-11-07 12:52:38 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6494bf2dfb
Add missing label. HT denver (who noticed it).
2014-11-07 11:34:59 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
62c0fe86a6
Fix more typos in "Root Filesystem..." section
2014-11-07 11:11:41 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
09a1218f8d
Fix some typos in "Root Filesystem..." section
2014-11-07 11:03:21 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
105da6758b
Fix typos in "Consumer Purchase and Unboxing" sec
2014-11-07 10:54:25 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
4bf096baa2
Fix a couple typos in case study intro paragraph
2014-11-07 10:50:14 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
a94763abe4
Fix minor typo in first case study paragraph
2014-11-07 10:44:58 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0491736fcc
Change Suggested by karen.
2014-11-07 10:24:09 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
34c53d92ee
Wrap these lines a bit.
2014-11-07 10:23:15 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
41ab698d2f
Correct formatting error: s/hellip/ldots/g.
2014-11-07 10:14:04 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0eb677d632
I think \verb has trouble in footnotes.
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It gave a LaTeX error so I changed dpkg to just be in quotes.
2014-11-07 10:13:36 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b5035383c6
Add intro paragraph.
2014-11-07 10:08:13 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f17465ba61
Summarize minor annoyances and wrap up.
2014-11-07 10:06:21 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
33b39cda78
Rewrite firmware comparison section.
2014-11-07 09:56:54 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0b9e6e7e28
Comment out U-Boot Installation section for now.
2014-11-07 09:50:06 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
93dc1669ca
Begin rewrite of U-Boot installation section.
2014-11-07 09:49:50 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b8fce5d22d
Installation sections follow compilation sections
2014-11-07 09:48:57 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
674c24aab4
Rewrite of discussion about U-Boot build.
2014-11-07 09:45:44 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
14256d55bb
Completed rewrite of install portion.
2014-11-07 09:27:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
57b58fe21a
Complete section on main build.
2014-11-07 09:20:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5d8c372377
Add another lesson learned.
2014-11-07 09:13:14 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6de4a36a46
Rework discussion of untar and build.
2014-11-07 09:09:46 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d9558037d9
After last commit, FIXME is now addressed.
2014-11-07 08:52:55 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5da1514eca
Remove old text vestiges & end para with :
2014-11-07 08:52:22 -05:00