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Bradley M. Kuhn
82831c9b81 Integrate this text and rewrite to make it work.
Also creates some label for references back.
2014-11-11 11:40:38 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
41c72f36e8 Slightly reword. 2014-11-09 17:56:35 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
febf4dd8cd Additional LocalWords that speller should accept. 2014-11-09 17:23:27 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7b025e18aa Full copyedit pass of ThinkPenguin chapter. 2014-11-09 17:21:19 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
675f66f5f3 Correct formatting on code listings.
The indention is coming through as non-breaking spaces in the HTML
output, which is not correct.
2014-11-09 16:44:00 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
68421306b9 Properly include reference. 2014-11-09 15:41:03 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
04a297b360 Correct \texttt{} commands. 2014-11-09 15:40:56 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2ab078f9ce Corrected directive. 2014-11-09 15:30:20 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0967aed577 Additional lesson learned. 2014-11-09 14:06:44 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c2c5402f8f Additional minor annoyances & summary for section. 2014-11-09 14:05:48 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed8ed30fab Wordsmith this sentence. 2014-11-09 14:05:26 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0a37731b72 Rewrote U-Boot Installation section.
My primary goal here was to put the text into a consistent voice, and
convert the text to a more flowing narrative rather than a step-by-step
list.

In a few places, I added commentary on the process where it seemed
appropriate, but I strove to keep that minimal.

Finally, labels to some unlabeled sections of gpl-lgpl.tex were needed
for back-references used in my rewrite.
2014-11-09 13:57:14 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a45f702c2a Formatting fixes for copyright notices. 2014-11-09 11:25:45 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1d48b4ae25 Rewrite introduction to U-Boot Installation.
Includes some additional detail from the instructions themselves.
2014-11-09 11:20:49 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
3d2bd4a725 Add "U-Boot Installation" sec w/ netcat suggestion 2014-11-09 11:16:46 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
35947f81c5 Merge after rebase against master & new addition.
My rewrite of the intro needed merging.
2014-11-09 10:21:20 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
65644adce4 Rewrite introduction to U-Boot Installation.
Includes some additional detail from the instructions themselves.
2014-11-09 10:17:58 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
a85626f9d9 Add "U-Boot Installation" sec w/ netcat suggestion 2014-11-09 07:51:09 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
3da9449e68 Add BusyBox output/kernel log; update study FIXME 2014-11-08 12:16:45 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
2a2b848f9d Fix typos/grammar in "U-Boot Compilation" sec on 2014-11-07 16:58:26 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
cc9b426c50 Clarify last paragraph of "Root Filesystem..." sec 2014-11-07 12:55:49 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d8b232e011 Fix broken \href links.
Discovered these while watching the weblogs for the HTML version
published on copyleft.org.
2014-11-07 12:52:38 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6494bf2dfb Add missing label. HT denver (who noticed it). 2014-11-07 11:34:59 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
62c0fe86a6 Fix more typos in "Root Filesystem..." section 2014-11-07 11:11:41 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
09a1218f8d Fix some typos in "Root Filesystem..." section 2014-11-07 11:03:21 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
105da6758b Fix typos in "Consumer Purchase and Unboxing" sec 2014-11-07 10:54:25 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
4bf096baa2 Fix a couple typos in case study intro paragraph 2014-11-07 10:50:14 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
a94763abe4 Fix minor typo in first case study paragraph 2014-11-07 10:44:58 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0491736fcc Change Suggested by karen. 2014-11-07 10:24:09 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
34c53d92ee Wrap these lines a bit. 2014-11-07 10:23:15 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
41ab698d2f Correct formatting error: s/hellip/ldots/g. 2014-11-07 10:14:04 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0eb677d632 I think \verb has trouble in footnotes.
It gave a LaTeX error so I changed dpkg to just be in quotes.
2014-11-07 10:13:36 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b5035383c6 Add intro paragraph. 2014-11-07 10:08:13 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f17465ba61 Summarize minor annoyances and wrap up. 2014-11-07 10:06:21 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
33b39cda78 Rewrite firmware comparison section. 2014-11-07 09:56:54 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0b9e6e7e28 Comment out U-Boot Installation section for now. 2014-11-07 09:50:06 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
93dc1669ca Begin rewrite of U-Boot installation section. 2014-11-07 09:49:50 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b8fce5d22d Installation sections follow compilation sections 2014-11-07 09:48:57 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
674c24aab4 Rewrite of discussion about U-Boot build. 2014-11-07 09:45:44 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
14256d55bb Completed rewrite of install portion. 2014-11-07 09:27:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
57b58fe21a Complete section on main build. 2014-11-07 09:20:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5d8c372377 Add another lesson learned. 2014-11-07 09:13:14 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6de4a36a46 Rework discussion of untar and build. 2014-11-07 09:09:46 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d9558037d9 After last commit, FIXME is now addressed. 2014-11-07 08:52:55 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5da1514eca Remove old text vestiges & end para with : 2014-11-07 08:52:22 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
07bed2fdbf Host system requirements & instruction specificity
Include a lesson learned for it, too.
2014-11-07 08:51:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
31220d4762 Discussion of included README & its lesson learned
Included also is a code listing of mounting the iso, and the like, which
required use of a new LaTeX package.
2014-11-07 08:39:24 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6063938804 Typo fix. 2014-11-07 08:14:58 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2978c96197 FIXME: I'm not keeping up with \tutorialpartsplit 2014-11-07 08:08:15 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1837849952 Discuss CCS CD included in package.
This yielded a lesson learned, so that is herein added as well.

A new reference was also added for the discussion of GPLv2§3(a).
2014-11-07 08:07:25 -05:00