Bradley M. Kuhn
0967aed577
Additional lesson learned.
2014-11-09 14:06:44 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c2c5402f8f
Additional minor annoyances & summary for section.
2014-11-09 14:05:48 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed8ed30fab
Wordsmith this sentence.
2014-11-09 14:05:26 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0a37731b72
Rewrote U-Boot Installation section.
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My primary goal here was to put the text into a consistent voice, and
convert the text to a more flowing narrative rather than a step-by-step
list.
In a few places, I added commentary on the process where it seemed
appropriate, but I strove to keep that minimal.
Finally, labels to some unlabeled sections of gpl-lgpl.tex were needed
for back-references used in my rewrite.
2014-11-09 13:57:14 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a45f702c2a
Formatting fixes for copyright notices.
2014-11-09 11:25:45 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1d48b4ae25
Rewrite introduction to U-Boot Installation.
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Includes some additional detail from the instructions themselves.
2014-11-09 11:20:49 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
3d2bd4a725
Add "U-Boot Installation" sec w/ netcat suggestion
2014-11-09 11:16:46 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
35947f81c5
Merge after rebase against master & new addition.
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My rewrite of the intro needed merging.
2014-11-09 10:21:20 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
65644adce4
Rewrite introduction to U-Boot Installation.
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Includes some additional detail from the instructions themselves.
2014-11-09 10:17:58 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
a85626f9d9
Add "U-Boot Installation" sec w/ netcat suggestion
2014-11-09 07:51:09 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
3da9449e68
Add BusyBox output/kernel log; update study FIXME
2014-11-08 12:16:45 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
2a2b848f9d
Fix typos/grammar in "U-Boot Compilation" sec on
2014-11-07 16:58:26 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
cc9b426c50
Clarify last paragraph of "Root Filesystem..." sec
2014-11-07 12:55:49 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d8b232e011
Fix broken \href links.
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Discovered these while watching the weblogs for the HTML version
published on copyleft.org.
2014-11-07 12:52:38 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6494bf2dfb
Add missing label. HT denver (who noticed it).
2014-11-07 11:34:59 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
62c0fe86a6
Fix more typos in "Root Filesystem..." section
2014-11-07 11:11:41 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
09a1218f8d
Fix some typos in "Root Filesystem..." section
2014-11-07 11:03:21 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
105da6758b
Fix typos in "Consumer Purchase and Unboxing" sec
2014-11-07 10:54:25 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
4bf096baa2
Fix a couple typos in case study intro paragraph
2014-11-07 10:50:14 -05:00
Denver Gingerich
a94763abe4
Fix minor typo in first case study paragraph
2014-11-07 10:44:58 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0491736fcc
Change Suggested by karen.
2014-11-07 10:24:09 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
34c53d92ee
Wrap these lines a bit.
2014-11-07 10:23:15 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
41ab698d2f
Correct formatting error: s/hellip/ldots/g.
2014-11-07 10:14:04 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0eb677d632
I think \verb has trouble in footnotes.
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It gave a LaTeX error so I changed dpkg to just be in quotes.
2014-11-07 10:13:36 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b5035383c6
Add intro paragraph.
2014-11-07 10:08:13 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f17465ba61
Summarize minor annoyances and wrap up.
2014-11-07 10:06:21 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
33b39cda78
Rewrite firmware comparison section.
2014-11-07 09:56:54 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0b9e6e7e28
Comment out U-Boot Installation section for now.
2014-11-07 09:50:06 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
93dc1669ca
Begin rewrite of U-Boot installation section.
2014-11-07 09:49:50 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b8fce5d22d
Installation sections follow compilation sections
2014-11-07 09:48:57 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
674c24aab4
Rewrite of discussion about U-Boot build.
2014-11-07 09:45:44 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
14256d55bb
Completed rewrite of install portion.
2014-11-07 09:27:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
57b58fe21a
Complete section on main build.
2014-11-07 09:20:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5d8c372377
Add another lesson learned.
2014-11-07 09:13:14 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6de4a36a46
Rework discussion of untar and build.
2014-11-07 09:09:46 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d9558037d9
After last commit, FIXME is now addressed.
2014-11-07 08:52:55 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5da1514eca
Remove old text vestiges & end para with :
2014-11-07 08:52:22 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
07bed2fdbf
Host system requirements & instruction specificity
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Include a lesson learned for it, too.
2014-11-07 08:51:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
31220d4762
Discussion of included README & its lesson learned
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Included also is a code listing of mounting the iso, and the like, which
required use of a new LaTeX package.
2014-11-07 08:39:24 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6063938804
Typo fix.
2014-11-07 08:14:58 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2978c96197
FIXME: I'm not keeping up with \tutorialpartsplit
2014-11-07 08:08:15 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1837849952
Discuss CCS CD included in package.
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This yielded a lesson learned, so that is herein added as well.
A new reference was also added for the discussion of GPLv2§3(a).
2014-11-07 08:07:25 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4381b16b5f
Begin section explaining purchasing on open market
2014-11-07 07:53:12 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
22ac76ad23
Add footnote describing how CCS reviews were done.
2014-11-07 07:43:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7e4ce7b710
Rework & remove some text from final paragraph
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This is now possible since the longer introduction material is
available.
2014-11-07 07:39:59 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed205b4f61
Write out "CCS" when first mentioned in chapter.
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Also, add FIXME for when more material is available to link to.
2014-11-07 07:38:12 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
fbbc18c7f6
Write new introductory section of this paragraph .
2014-11-07 07:35:19 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
72f50f68ea
Move ThinkPenguin CCS case study to first one.
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The original text for this case study was developed as the final
chapter, as sort of a "you heard about the rest, now try the best"
approach. However, I think we want to put this one first. "Hope before
despair" is perhaps a better attitude?
The diff on this one didn't come out so clean, so it's a bit difficult
to see that I'm just moving a big block of text up.
I diffed it against a version of this file, from:
commit 2f2e5f9e4c
on 2014-10-15 22:14:45 -0400
that was before work began on this chapter, and the diff was relatively
clean.
2014-11-07 07:07:19 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b46d1bc16f
Correction to formatting on copyright notices.
2014-11-06 21:30:53 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
23c7fd7449
URLs should always use \url{URL}, not \verb0URL0
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I just decided this should be done even when the URLs are fake ones in
example.{com,org}.
2014-11-06 17:02:23 -05:00