Bradley M. Kuhn
f9bea67be7
Wordsmith paragraph and add label it now references.
2014-03-21 12:54:32 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6cbb2d530d
Wordsmith paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:54:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
31118ec3c1
Removed some specific company names from here, particularly because the
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information is somewhat out of date.
2014-03-21 12:54:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
be829a5f2a
m-dash
2014-03-21 12:54:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4e4919167e
Proprietary relicensing comment.
2014-03-21 12:54:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ab4861b27e
Spell check.
2014-03-21 12:54:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
730a079cc7
Comment out these sections.
2014-03-21 12:54:15 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
56382c650a
Fix to what really happened.
2014-03-21 12:54:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3224b6aef3
GPLv3§14.
2014-03-21 12:54:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0c96a3bb7d
Affero GPL section, not doing this justice now, but this is good enough to
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print for Monday's class.
2014-03-21 12:54:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8bd2bbc58d
Wrote and merged text for GPLv3§12
2014-03-21 12:53:56 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6f718b34bb
Correct ' signs in these places.
2014-03-21 12:53:55 -04:00
Tony Sebro
a394bce20f
Made final edits to Implied Patent License section
2014-03-21 12:53:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
859cfccca7
Resolve all undefined reference.
2014-03-21 12:53:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
296b733311
Do not really need a section break here.
2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
71b8aa67c9
I still love to write texit.
2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
539cc5e81b
Rewrite the entire Patent section.
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Much of this text, pasted from various different rationale documents, deals
with issues that either changed in later drafts, or is focused on various
minutia about the Microsoft/Novell deal that seems in retrospect rather
unimportant for many reasons.
Hopefully what I've cut down to is the bare essentials of what's needed to
explain the patent section of GPLv3 to a newbie. I suspect that I'll want
later to go over this and add more material or reword things further.
I've added a few FIXME-LATER's for that reason.
2014-03-21 12:53:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cea2bde2d5
Finish section.
2014-03-21 12:53:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9683b6ed0f
Move one paragraph around, and revise another.
2014-03-21 12:53:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8e06bdea08
Finish Section 9.
2014-03-21 12:53:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3ec650424
Termination section rewrite.
2014-03-21 12:53:38 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d7bff4baa5
Comment out this text for now.
2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
96735e78d0
Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs.
2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bb29c91417
Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later.
2014-03-21 12:53:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dc7f0fea56
Rewrite text on GPLv3§7.
2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cfde3638b1
Redraft paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
168594f3c2
Rename section
2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7584fb1122
I think this text won't be useful.
2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8cd5c5e373
Rewrite paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:53:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
06178c3fb2
Move this section on License Compatibility here.
2014-03-21 12:53:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
110f9ece93
Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions.
2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c28313b014
Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions.
2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
27ec9cecb9
Finish up Installation Information section.
2014-03-21 12:53:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b00ddaa698
Rewrite material on Installation Information, put it into sections.
2014-03-20 17:59:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3e528a31c
Various changes to make all that Magnuson-Moss verbiage useful to the tutorial.
2014-03-20 17:46:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10244bee14
Purely formatting changes.
2014-03-20 17:38:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
aa15f936ce
Fontana noted that I edited this poorly the first time,
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likely due in my haste to make a funny commit message:
<fontana> bkuhn: I think there's an editing problem in that change
<bkuhn> fontana: I was showing you the commit message more than the content
<bkuhn> are you saying I made an editing erro[r]?
<fontana> yes
2014-03-20 17:36:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b17d0710ac
Reword paragraph.
2014-03-20 17:34:09 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cee78c87ef
This change does the job that needs to be done to this ¶ for this tutorial.
2014-03-20 17:29:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
579704541d
Reword some of this and remove FIXME.
2014-03-20 17:27:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dd9e082222
Rewrote paragraph.
2014-03-20 17:24:41 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4623ebe2ec
Reword this paragraph that was just moved here.
2014-03-20 17:24:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca2d66685
Move this paragraph to the right place.
2014-03-20 17:23:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a83760dcc7
Rewrote this paragraph, removing much which wasn't useful.
2014-03-20 17:19:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f53db9025a
Remove FIXME and add subsection
2014-03-20 16:42:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7390b7c0f9
This text was so old (from the earliest drafts) that it was not particularly useful.
2014-03-20 16:23:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2145ca8186
This text is no longer useful.
2014-03-20 16:22:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6d5ca098a1
Reword these two paragraphs.
2014-03-20 15:40:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5111178260
Rewrite paragraph.
2014-03-20 15:35:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8faf96d5e5
Rewrite this paragraph.
2014-03-20 15:25:35 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dac68d1410
This material was accidentally pasted down with GPLv3§7 stuff,
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but it's for GPLv3§6.
2014-03-20 15:21:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9de90679bb
Rewrite this paragraph on GPLv3§6(d)
2014-03-20 15:16:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a5079818d4
Rewrite description of GPLv3~\S6(d).
2014-03-20 15:11:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b7dfcb2372
Add missing word.
2014-03-20 14:33:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9bd27fcffe
Rewrote text for the final parts of GPLv3§5 and early parts of GPLv3§6.
2014-03-20 14:30:32 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2b98827e56
Missing period, and remove FIXME that's now fixed.
2014-03-20 13:20:12 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8f33303a9f
Move this stuff to the right place and get subsection number right.
2014-03-20 13:15:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10b0ade5d5
Rewrote this sentence for tutorial context.
2014-03-20 13:12:54 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
df7c046d04
Merge in this last paragraph in this section.
2014-03-20 13:00:43 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
82f2c66198
number agreement.
2014-03-20 12:36:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3465a2dd60
Rewrite this paragraph to fit the tutorial.
2014-03-20 12:35:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2cfbed706c
Merge in text and do rewrites for description of GPLv3§4.
2014-03-20 12:33:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
360d6057f1
Rename chapters that look oddly named when formatted in fncychap's Conny.
2014-03-20 10:12:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7a755cf4cb
Correct various references and labels to consistency.
2014-03-20 10:11:47 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ee9e86642a
Properly update and format copyright notices and title pages.
2014-03-20 09:59:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed2f3b21d0
Merge in (with rewrites) this additional text on GPLv3§3 into tutorial.
2014-03-20 09:44:03 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
08c38c104d
Rewrite material describing GPLv3§3 into tutorial text.
2014-03-20 09:41:54 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9f6175cf73
This should be a subsection.
2014-03-20 09:34:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6faa16d457
Use \S here.
2014-03-20 09:34:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca0ae7ccd
Introductory paragraph to section on GPLv3§3.
2014-03-20 09:34:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0be18ce192
Label section and link it up to other mentions of DRM
2014-03-20 09:27:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed8fb5a938
Reworked section describing how the DRM issue and the like relates.
2014-03-20 09:24:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6c97541824
Rewrite and wordsmith this paragraph.
2014-03-20 08:57:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d2c59d90e9
Intro paragraph to new section explaining GPLv3's lock-down issue.
2014-03-20 08:53:35 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dccc2155ae
Rewrite paragraph describing last paragraph of GPLv3§2.
2014-03-20 08:50:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
fa892fe5b6
I apparently love to type \texit instead of \textit.
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I guess I like to "TeX it". Not surprising, huh?
2014-03-20 08:47:41 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
486aa88f1a
Fix typo in macro name.
2014-03-20 08:46:47 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
647d2e27a4
Rewrite contractor's provision.
2014-03-20 08:46:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7b2a124827
Move this text around to the right place before rewriting it.
2014-03-20 08:43:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
97deccc4d1
Rewrite paragraph, removing reference to long defunct patent retaliation.
2014-03-20 08:42:17 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cb18441eba
Labels now necessary due to addition from last commit.
2014-03-20 08:40:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
eeaf851345
Write paragraph on "unmodified Program", relating it to User Product issue.
2014-03-20 08:40:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c74733d567
Note about how I'd like to make the HTML version formatted a bit better,
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using stuff from what Texinfo does.
2014-03-20 08:39:10 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e0a91a924c
Rewrite these two paragraphs to fit the tutorial, including new intro to them.
2014-03-20 08:32:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0efbc4029f
Last wordsmith pass of this footnote. It's not worth more time than this,
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I'm just having fun with it.
2014-03-20 08:26:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0ea62d5ff9
Wordsmith the footnote from previous commit.
2014-03-20 08:22:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5f356c351a
Correct name of macro.
2014-03-20 08:17:52 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
77579a83f4
Integrate case law reference on conspicuousness into this existing text.
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Include my lawyer-bashing-ish little anecdote too, just for fun.
2014-03-20 08:17:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c7a3684824
Integrate text regarding GPLv2§8 learned during GPLv3 into this section.
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I had to substantially rewrite the text pasted from the rationale document
here to fit the text into the GPLv2-specific discussion that intended for
this section of the tutorial.
2014-03-20 08:09:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ebefdf8de8
Move this text out of the way from discussion of section 2.
2014-03-20 08:02:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0f3bc95c51
Rework pasted text into a coherent description of system library exception.
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This required writing a lot of additional text to make it work.
I also added my cheeky rule of thumb. :)
2014-03-20 08:01:17 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f65ecb47a6
Actually, this text does belong in this section, with a forward reference.
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I also wordsmithed it to work better in this section.
2014-03-20 06:47:59 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed42a7eba5
This text on Installation Information is a description of GPLv3§6,
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not of GPLv3§2.
2014-03-20 06:41:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
428a539c16
Edited text into a coherent description of source code and CCS.
2014-03-20 06:39:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d587d3556c
Put together transition section.
2014-03-20 05:48:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
262ba65e3f
Wrote a description of Appropriate Legal Notice from scratch.
2014-03-20 05:48:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ae87bcb281
Put together explanation convey from pasted text and some additions of my own.
2014-03-20 05:42:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
88388e6d24
Merge together text that explains propagation.
2014-03-20 05:38:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1eef642eff
Covered Work definition.
2014-03-20 05:25:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
07a02b0b1c
Merge various texts to a coherent section on "modify" & internationalization.
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Ultimately, some of the text related to "modify" made good seed material to
explain the internationalization motivations of GPLv3. That text is moved
and expanded, and the various parts about the "modify" definition are merged
together into one subsection.
2014-03-19 19:17:52 -04:00