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Bradley M. Kuhn
f9bea67be7 Wordsmith paragraph and add label it now references. 2014-03-21 12:54:32 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6cbb2d530d Wordsmith paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:54:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
31118ec3c1 Removed some specific company names from here, particularly because the
information is somewhat out of date.
2014-03-21 12:54:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
be829a5f2a m-dash 2014-03-21 12:54:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4e4919167e Proprietary relicensing comment. 2014-03-21 12:54:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ab4861b27e Spell check. 2014-03-21 12:54:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
730a079cc7 Comment out these sections. 2014-03-21 12:54:15 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
56382c650a Fix to what really happened. 2014-03-21 12:54:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3224b6aef3 GPLv3§14. 2014-03-21 12:54:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0c96a3bb7d Affero GPL section, not doing this justice now, but this is good enough to
print for Monday's class.
2014-03-21 12:54:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8bd2bbc58d Wrote and merged text for GPLv3§12 2014-03-21 12:53:56 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6f718b34bb Correct ' signs in these places. 2014-03-21 12:53:55 -04:00
Tony Sebro
a394bce20f Made final edits to Implied Patent License section 2014-03-21 12:53:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
859cfccca7 Resolve all undefined reference. 2014-03-21 12:53:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
296b733311 Do not really need a section break here. 2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
71b8aa67c9 I still love to write texit. 2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
539cc5e81b Rewrite the entire Patent section.
Much of this text, pasted from various different rationale documents, deals
with issues that either changed in later drafts, or is focused on various
minutia about the Microsoft/Novell deal that seems in retrospect rather
unimportant for many reasons.

Hopefully what I've cut down to is the bare essentials of what's needed to
explain the patent section of GPLv3 to a newbie.  I suspect that I'll want
later to go over this and add more material or reword things further.

I've added a few FIXME-LATER's for that reason.
2014-03-21 12:53:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cea2bde2d5 Finish section. 2014-03-21 12:53:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9683b6ed0f Move one paragraph around, and revise another. 2014-03-21 12:53:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8e06bdea08 Finish Section 9. 2014-03-21 12:53:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3ec650424 Termination section rewrite. 2014-03-21 12:53:38 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d7bff4baa5 Comment out this text for now. 2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
96735e78d0 Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs. 2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bb29c91417 Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later. 2014-03-21 12:53:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dc7f0fea56 Rewrite text on GPLv3§7. 2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cfde3638b1 Redraft paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
168594f3c2 Rename section 2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7584fb1122 I think this text won't be useful. 2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8cd5c5e373 Rewrite paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:53:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
06178c3fb2 Move this section on License Compatibility here. 2014-03-21 12:53:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
110f9ece93 Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions. 2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c28313b014 Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions. 2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
27ec9cecb9 Finish up Installation Information section. 2014-03-21 12:53:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b00ddaa698 Rewrite material on Installation Information, put it into sections. 2014-03-20 17:59:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3e528a31c Various changes to make all that Magnuson-Moss verbiage useful to the tutorial. 2014-03-20 17:46:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10244bee14 Purely formatting changes. 2014-03-20 17:38:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
aa15f936ce Fontana noted that I edited this poorly the first time,
likely due in my haste to make a funny commit message:

<fontana> bkuhn: I think there's an editing problem in that change
<bkuhn> fontana: I was showing you the commit message more than the content
<bkuhn> are you saying I made an editing erro[r]?
<fontana> yes
2014-03-20 17:36:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b17d0710ac Reword paragraph. 2014-03-20 17:34:09 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cee78c87ef This change does the job that needs to be done to this ¶ for this tutorial. 2014-03-20 17:29:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
579704541d Reword some of this and remove FIXME. 2014-03-20 17:27:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dd9e082222 Rewrote paragraph. 2014-03-20 17:24:41 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4623ebe2ec Reword this paragraph that was just moved here. 2014-03-20 17:24:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca2d66685 Move this paragraph to the right place. 2014-03-20 17:23:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a83760dcc7 Rewrote this paragraph, removing much which wasn't useful. 2014-03-20 17:19:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f53db9025a Remove FIXME and add subsection 2014-03-20 16:42:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7390b7c0f9 This text was so old (from the earliest drafts) that it was not particularly useful. 2014-03-20 16:23:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2145ca8186 This text is no longer useful. 2014-03-20 16:22:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6d5ca098a1 Reword these two paragraphs. 2014-03-20 15:40:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5111178260 Rewrite paragraph. 2014-03-20 15:35:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8faf96d5e5 Rewrite this paragraph. 2014-03-20 15:25:35 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dac68d1410 This material was accidentally pasted down with GPLv3§7 stuff,
but it's for GPLv3§6.
2014-03-20 15:21:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9de90679bb Rewrite this paragraph on GPLv3§6(d) 2014-03-20 15:16:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a5079818d4 Rewrite description of GPLv3~\S6(d). 2014-03-20 15:11:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b7dfcb2372 Add missing word. 2014-03-20 14:33:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9bd27fcffe Rewrote text for the final parts of GPLv3§5 and early parts of GPLv3§6. 2014-03-20 14:30:32 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2b98827e56 Missing period, and remove FIXME that's now fixed. 2014-03-20 13:20:12 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8f33303a9f Move this stuff to the right place and get subsection number right. 2014-03-20 13:15:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10b0ade5d5 Rewrote this sentence for tutorial context. 2014-03-20 13:12:54 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
df7c046d04 Merge in this last paragraph in this section. 2014-03-20 13:00:43 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
82f2c66198 number agreement. 2014-03-20 12:36:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3465a2dd60 Rewrite this paragraph to fit the tutorial. 2014-03-20 12:35:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2cfbed706c Merge in text and do rewrites for description of GPLv3§4. 2014-03-20 12:33:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
360d6057f1 Rename chapters that look oddly named when formatted in fncychap's Conny. 2014-03-20 10:12:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7a755cf4cb Correct various references and labels to consistency. 2014-03-20 10:11:47 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ee9e86642a Properly update and format copyright notices and title pages. 2014-03-20 09:59:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed2f3b21d0 Merge in (with rewrites) this additional text on GPLv3§3 into tutorial. 2014-03-20 09:44:03 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
08c38c104d Rewrite material describing GPLv3§3 into tutorial text. 2014-03-20 09:41:54 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9f6175cf73 This should be a subsection. 2014-03-20 09:34:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6faa16d457 Use \S here. 2014-03-20 09:34:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca0ae7ccd Introductory paragraph to section on GPLv3§3. 2014-03-20 09:34:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0be18ce192 Label section and link it up to other mentions of DRM 2014-03-20 09:27:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed8fb5a938 Reworked section describing how the DRM issue and the like relates. 2014-03-20 09:24:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6c97541824 Rewrite and wordsmith this paragraph. 2014-03-20 08:57:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d2c59d90e9 Intro paragraph to new section explaining GPLv3's lock-down issue. 2014-03-20 08:53:35 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dccc2155ae Rewrite paragraph describing last paragraph of GPLv3§2. 2014-03-20 08:50:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
fa892fe5b6 I apparently love to type \texit instead of \textit.
I guess I like to "TeX it".  Not surprising, huh?
2014-03-20 08:47:41 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
486aa88f1a Fix typo in macro name. 2014-03-20 08:46:47 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
647d2e27a4 Rewrite contractor's provision. 2014-03-20 08:46:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7b2a124827 Move this text around to the right place before rewriting it. 2014-03-20 08:43:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
97deccc4d1 Rewrite paragraph, removing reference to long defunct patent retaliation. 2014-03-20 08:42:17 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cb18441eba Labels now necessary due to addition from last commit. 2014-03-20 08:40:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
eeaf851345 Write paragraph on "unmodified Program", relating it to User Product issue. 2014-03-20 08:40:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c74733d567 Note about how I'd like to make the HTML version formatted a bit better,
using stuff from what Texinfo does.
2014-03-20 08:39:10 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e0a91a924c Rewrite these two paragraphs to fit the tutorial, including new intro to them. 2014-03-20 08:32:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0efbc4029f Last wordsmith pass of this footnote. It's not worth more time than this,
I'm just having fun with it.
2014-03-20 08:26:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0ea62d5ff9 Wordsmith the footnote from previous commit. 2014-03-20 08:22:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5f356c351a Correct name of macro. 2014-03-20 08:17:52 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
77579a83f4 Integrate case law reference on conspicuousness into this existing text.
Include my lawyer-bashing-ish little anecdote too, just for fun.
2014-03-20 08:17:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c7a3684824 Integrate text regarding GPLv2§8 learned during GPLv3 into this section.
I had to substantially rewrite the text pasted from the rationale document
here to fit the text into the GPLv2-specific discussion that intended for
this section of the tutorial.
2014-03-20 08:09:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ebefdf8de8 Move this text out of the way from discussion of section 2. 2014-03-20 08:02:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0f3bc95c51 Rework pasted text into a coherent description of system library exception.
This required writing a lot of additional text to make it work.

I also added my cheeky rule of thumb. :)
2014-03-20 08:01:17 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f65ecb47a6 Actually, this text does belong in this section, with a forward reference.
I also wordsmithed it to work better in this section.
2014-03-20 06:47:59 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed42a7eba5 This text on Installation Information is a description of GPLv3§6,
not of GPLv3§2.
2014-03-20 06:41:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
428a539c16 Edited text into a coherent description of source code and CCS. 2014-03-20 06:39:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d587d3556c Put together transition section. 2014-03-20 05:48:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
262ba65e3f Wrote a description of Appropriate Legal Notice from scratch. 2014-03-20 05:48:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ae87bcb281 Put together explanation convey from pasted text and some additions of my own. 2014-03-20 05:42:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
88388e6d24 Merge together text that explains propagation. 2014-03-20 05:38:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1eef642eff Covered Work definition. 2014-03-20 05:25:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
07a02b0b1c Merge various texts to a coherent section on "modify" & internationalization.
Ultimately, some of the text related to "modify" made good seed material to
explain the internationalization motivations of GPLv3.  That text is moved
and expanded, and the various parts about the "modify" definition are merged
together into one subsection.
2014-03-19 19:17:52 -04:00