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enyst
831c21febb Strictly speaking, for proprietary relicensing 'only' unconditional permissions are needed.
Signed-off-by: enyst <engel.nyst@gmail.com>
2014-09-19 18:09:46 -04:00
enyst
f31235afbc Possible fixes for incomplete or unclear phrases
Signed-off-by: enyst <engel.nyst@gmail.com>
2014-09-19 18:09:45 -04:00
enyst
d638f60cd9 Fixes for typos
Signed-off-by: enyst <engel.nyst@gmail.com>
2014-09-19 18:09:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b7bb47188f Explain GPLv2 implicit private modification rights
I've long been aware that GPLv2 "technically" governed private
modifications and that generally there were probably more requirements
on privately modified versions of GPLv2'd works than most people assumed
in practice, including commonly held public interpretation by FSF.

HT Wolvereness, who pointed out to me that GPLv3 solved that problem.
When I spoke to Fontana about it, he was indeed aware that this text was
"missing" in GPLv2 and that GPLv3 properly added it, through some
politics during the GPLv3 process.

I've added herein the ultimate historical conclusions about GPLv2's
interpretation and how GPLv3 clarified it.  I've left out the color
about the politics of how it got added, not because they are not
interesting, relevant and germane to tutorial, but because we don't have
a good place yet in the tutorial for discussion of GPLv3 drafting
politics, and frankly if we have such a section, Fontana ought to write
it, not me.
2014-09-19 17:57:52 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3847ee1c1b Add label for this section. 2014-09-19 17:57:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d982de460a GPLv2§2 is for *distributing* modified versions.
This text needs to be clear that GPLv2§2 doesn't govern merely the act
of modification, but distributing modified versions (in whole or in
part).  The previous text here wasn't clear on that point.
2014-09-19 17:41:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e5ee0fd0a1 GPLv3 clarifies private modification permission.
While both GPLv2 and GPLv3 have long been considered to grant unabridged
right to private modification, GPLv3 has much clearer and explicit
wording to this effect.

This should be noted when that paragraph is explained.  This change
herein does that.

HT Wolvereness for pointing this difference between GPLv2 and GPLv3 out
to me.
2014-09-19 17:36:03 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b5b0e2403e Opposite meaning was what was desired here.
HT Bob Hogg for discovering this error.
2014-08-12 08:12:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1548847af9 Credit Martin with his copy editing work in each part.
This required some page reformatting (fewer space skipping).
2014-04-24 19:26:02 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
7648027275 Typo fixes 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
85577d597a Misc copy editing: fix some typos, grammar, and formatting errors 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
74899d7d1c Fix quotation marks so they show up in the text 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
6ba2ff285f Add missing label 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
0c48d8fdd3 Fix broken LaTeX ref commands 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
f7211a9f8a Fix broken LaTeX section commands 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3ed7c26e43 Merge branch 'cle-edits', which brings in Donald's copy-edit changes.
There were minor conflicts in gpl-lgpl.tex.
2014-03-24 06:56:42 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
14e09b0b18 This should not be plural, and an shouldn't be in the quotes. 2014-03-24 05:56:18 -04:00
donaldr3
a577a77eb4 people should email licensing@fsf.org, not compliance@fsf.org 2014-03-21 19:35:10 -04:00
donaldr3
9ab67f3125 the 2014-03-21 19:23:04 -04:00
donaldr3
43cc44ae29 the 2014-03-21 19:17:23 -04:00
donaldr3
c6063eca3c the everywhere 2014-03-21 19:15:20 -04:00
donaldr3
5545101088 the gpl 2014-03-21 19:10:17 -04:00
donaldr3
c2415647a5 the gpl 2014-03-21 19:07:34 -04:00
donaldr3
484ca88b81 remove extra words 2014-03-21 18:40:50 -04:00
donaldr3
d826095d06 multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 18:37:33 -04:00
donaldr3
1aa98048c1 remove repeated phrase 2014-03-21 18:32:42 -04:00
donaldr3
f58920bbe5 the gpl 2014-03-21 18:19:55 -04:00
donaldr3
33e47ace60 multiple edits 2014-03-21 18:00:09 -04:00
donaldr3
a4feaf97bf multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 17:50:54 -04:00
donaldr3
c6183da7fd restructured sentence 2014-03-21 17:48:04 -04:00
donaldr3
30efea6579 the gpl 2014-03-21 17:34:08 -04:00
donaldr3
1070277ed6 the gpl 2014-03-21 17:29:18 -04:00
donaldr3
b776c58280 add of the 2014-03-21 17:26:43 -04:00
donaldr3
814b5ce01c administrative 2014-03-21 17:22:43 -04:00
donaldr3
e1f07949fe the gpl 2014-03-21 17:17:19 -04:00
donaldr3
20fba8b654 removed extra 'software' 2014-03-21 17:10:46 -04:00
donaldr3
58beece8fd multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 17:04:41 -04:00
donaldr3
f167d0387a multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 16:55:06 -04:00
donaldr3
4753f14a82 re-distributors 2014-03-21 16:51:57 -04:00
donaldr3
1dd7d7b4cc the gpl and restriction/condition 2014-03-21 16:50:11 -04:00
donaldr3
30389cad6c multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 16:45:47 -04:00
donaldr3
fd3be34dc4 have/having 2014-03-21 16:32:55 -04:00
donaldr3
7ce3980bd6 multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 16:10:21 -04:00
donaldr3
3e526a2589 multiple copy edits 2014-03-21 16:05:43 -04:00
donaldr3
a7f901e4a3 other/otherwise 2014-03-21 16:04:18 -04:00
donaldr3
0b2aa866a7 remove extra 'the' 2014-03-21 16:02:59 -04:00
donaldr3
04bc20eba7 removed extra 'can' 2014-03-21 16:01:39 -04:00
donaldr3
e1ef7578f7 a/an 2014-03-21 16:01:16 -04:00
donaldr3
ec363feb97 removed extraneous clause 2014-03-21 16:00:52 -04:00
donaldr3
8310c8947a removed extra sentence 2014-03-21 16:00:19 -04:00
donaldr3
f7ff1ac0d5 removed extra word 'which' 2014-03-21 15:59:41 -04:00
donaldr3
d55d2787c8 removed 'that' 2014-03-21 15:56:37 -04:00
donaldr3
e92e89ae55 chose/choose 2014-03-21 15:33:08 -04:00
donaldr3
f0efbf5fa8 chose/choose 2014-03-21 15:32:40 -04:00
donaldr3
592a6f08de the are ultimate/ there are ultimately 2014-03-21 15:31:49 -04:00
donaldr3
531f142207 the gpl 2014-03-21 15:14:35 -04:00
donaldr3
c007884497 the gpl 2014-03-21 15:12:38 -04:00
donaldr3
4098beb707 an/a 2014-03-21 15:11:09 -04:00
donaldr3
83b69e1f5c added missing for 2014-03-21 15:10:05 -04:00
donaldr3
0e5e24093f the gpl 2014-03-21 15:07:37 -04:00
donaldr3
2880f4eebb control to controls 2014-03-21 14:56:43 -04:00
donaldr3
9bbbda9847 mechanism to mechanisms 2014-03-21 14:39:37 -04:00
donaldr3
2774ae23d2 removed extraneous 'of' 2014-03-21 14:17:10 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1c10eb02eb Change paragraph to refer to next parts. 2014-03-21 12:55:10 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f34606819a Various formatting fixes. 2014-03-21 12:55:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
58f65dff21 These should all be subsection. 2014-03-21 12:55:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8486e56cab Various temp changes to handle printing it this weekend. 2014-03-21 12:55:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f9bea67be7 Wordsmith paragraph and add label it now references. 2014-03-21 12:54:32 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6cbb2d530d Wordsmith paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:54:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
31118ec3c1 Removed some specific company names from here, particularly because the
information is somewhat out of date.
2014-03-21 12:54:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
be829a5f2a m-dash 2014-03-21 12:54:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4e4919167e Proprietary relicensing comment. 2014-03-21 12:54:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ab4861b27e Spell check. 2014-03-21 12:54:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
730a079cc7 Comment out these sections. 2014-03-21 12:54:15 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
56382c650a Fix to what really happened. 2014-03-21 12:54:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3224b6aef3 GPLv3§14. 2014-03-21 12:54:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0c96a3bb7d Affero GPL section, not doing this justice now, but this is good enough to
print for Monday's class.
2014-03-21 12:54:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8bd2bbc58d Wrote and merged text for GPLv3§12 2014-03-21 12:53:56 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6f718b34bb Correct ' signs in these places. 2014-03-21 12:53:55 -04:00
Tony Sebro
a394bce20f Made final edits to Implied Patent License section 2014-03-21 12:53:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
859cfccca7 Resolve all undefined reference. 2014-03-21 12:53:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
296b733311 Do not really need a section break here. 2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
71b8aa67c9 I still love to write texit. 2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
539cc5e81b Rewrite the entire Patent section.
Much of this text, pasted from various different rationale documents, deals
with issues that either changed in later drafts, or is focused on various
minutia about the Microsoft/Novell deal that seems in retrospect rather
unimportant for many reasons.

Hopefully what I've cut down to is the bare essentials of what's needed to
explain the patent section of GPLv3 to a newbie.  I suspect that I'll want
later to go over this and add more material or reword things further.

I've added a few FIXME-LATER's for that reason.
2014-03-21 12:53:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cea2bde2d5 Finish section. 2014-03-21 12:53:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9683b6ed0f Move one paragraph around, and revise another. 2014-03-21 12:53:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8e06bdea08 Finish Section 9. 2014-03-21 12:53:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3ec650424 Termination section rewrite. 2014-03-21 12:53:38 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d7bff4baa5 Comment out this text for now. 2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
96735e78d0 Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs. 2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bb29c91417 Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later. 2014-03-21 12:53:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dc7f0fea56 Rewrite text on GPLv3§7. 2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cfde3638b1 Redraft paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
168594f3c2 Rename section 2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7584fb1122 I think this text won't be useful. 2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8cd5c5e373 Rewrite paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:53:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
06178c3fb2 Move this section on License Compatibility here. 2014-03-21 12:53:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
110f9ece93 Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions. 2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c28313b014 Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions. 2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
27ec9cecb9 Finish up Installation Information section. 2014-03-21 12:53:19 -04:00