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							|  | @ -1473,7 +1473,7 @@ continues and develops, remains Free as in freedom. | |||
| To achieve that goal, GPLv2~\S2 first sets forth that the rights of | ||||
| redistribution of modified versions are the same as those for verbatim | ||||
| copying, as presented in GPLv2~\S1.  Therefore, the details of charging money, | ||||
| keeping copyright notices intact, and other GPLv2~\S1 provisions are in tact | ||||
| keeping copyright notices intact, and other GPLv2~\S1 provisions are intact | ||||
| here as well.  However, there are three additional requirements. | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| The first (GPLv2~\S2(a)) requires that modified files carry ``prominent | ||||
|  | @ -1671,7 +1671,7 @@ directed by David Lynch, must be perceptible by human eyes and ears to | |||
| have any value. | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| Software is not so.  While the source code --- the human-readable | ||||
| representation of software is of keen interest to programmers -- users and | ||||
| representation of software --- is of keen interest to programmers, users and | ||||
| programmers alike cannot make the proper use of software in that | ||||
| human-readable form.  Binary code --- the ones and zeros that the computer | ||||
| can understand --- must be predicable and attainable for the software to | ||||
|  | @ -2302,7 +2302,7 @@ FSF sought to ease interpretation of GPL in other countries by replacement of | |||
| USA-centric\footnote{See Section~\ref{non-usa-copyright} of this tutorial for | ||||
|   a brief discussion about non-USA copyright systems.}  copyright phrases and | ||||
| wording with neutral terminology rooted in description of behavior rather | ||||
| than specific statue.  As can be seen in the section-by-section discussion of | ||||
| than specific statute.  As can be seen in the section-by-section discussion of | ||||
| GPLv3 that follows, nearly every section had changes related to issues of | ||||
| internationalization. | ||||
|   | ||||
|  | @ -2803,7 +2803,7 @@ object-code-related copyleft provisions are in GPLv3\S6, discussed in | |||
| \S~\ref{GPLv3s6} of this tutorial).  Compared to GPLv2\S2(b), GPLv3\S5(c) | ||||
| states that the GPL applies to the whole of the work.  Such was stated | ||||
| already in GPLv2\S2(b), in ``in whole or in part'', but this simplified | ||||
| wording makes it clear the entire covered work | ||||
| wording makes it clear it applies to the entire covered work. | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| Another change in GPLv3\S5(c) is the removal of the | ||||
| words ``at no charge,'' which was often is misunderstood upon na\"{i}ve | ||||
|  | @ -2839,7 +2839,7 @@ in \S~\ref{GPLv2s3} of this tutorial), the distribution of object code may | |||
| either be accompanied by the machine-readable source code, or it may be | ||||
| accompanied by a valid written offer to provide the machine-readable source | ||||
| code.  However, unlike in GPLv2, that offer cannot be exercised by any third | ||||
| party; rather, only those ``who possesses the object code'' can exercise | ||||
| party; rather, only those ``who possess the object code'' can exercise | ||||
| the offer.  (Note that this is a substantial narrowing of requirements of | ||||
| offer fulfillment, and is a wonderful counterexample to dispute claims that | ||||
| the GPLv3 has more requirements than GPLv2.) | ||||
|  | @ -2921,7 +2921,7 @@ over a network, provided that the distributor offers equivalent access to | |||
| copy the Corresponding Source Code ``in the same way through the same | ||||
| place''.  This wording might be interpreted to permit peer-to-peer | ||||
| distribution of binaries \textit{if} they are packaged together with the CCS, | ||||
| but such packaging impractical, for at least three reasons.  First, even if | ||||
| but such packaging is impractical, for at least three reasons.  First, even if | ||||
| the CCS is packaged with the object code, it will only be available to a | ||||
| non-seeding peer at the end of the distribution process, but the peer will | ||||
| already have been providing parts of the binary to others in the network. | ||||
|  | @ -2933,7 +2933,7 @@ transmission time.  Third, in current practice, CCS packages themselves tend | |||
| -- thus, there generally will be too few participants downloading the same | ||||
| source package at the same time to enable effective seeding and distribution. | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| GPLv3~\S6(e) addresses this issues.  If a licensee conveys such a work of | ||||
| GPLv3~\S6(e) addresses these issues.  If a licensee conveys such a work of | ||||
| object code using peer-to-peer transmission, that licensee is in compliance | ||||
| with GPLv3~\S6 if the licensee informs other peers where the object code and | ||||
| its CCS are publicly available at no charge under subsection GPLv3~\S6(d). | ||||
|  | @ -2969,7 +2969,7 @@ to enable users to link proprietary programs to modified libraries.) | |||
| 
 | ||||
| \label{user-product} | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| The scope of these requirements are narrow.  GPLv3~\S6 introduces the concept | ||||
| The scope of these requirements is narrow.  GPLv3~\S6 introduces the concept | ||||
| of a ``User Product'', which includes devices that are sold for personal, | ||||
| family, or household use.  Distributors are only required to provide | ||||
| Installation Information when they convey object code in a User Product. | ||||
|  | @ -3009,7 +3009,7 @@ favorable to consumer rights.\footnote{The Magnuson-Moss consumer product | |||
|   adopted in several state and provincial consumer protection laws.} | ||||
| Ideally, this body of interpretation\footnote{The FSF, however, was very | ||||
|   clear that incorporation of such legal interpretation was in no way | ||||
|   intended work as a general choice of USA law for GPLv3.} will guide | ||||
|   intended to work as a general choice of USA law for GPLv3.} will guide | ||||
| interpretation of the consumer product subdefinition in GPLv3~\S6, and this | ||||
| will hopefully provide a degree of legal certainty advantageous to device | ||||
| manufacturers and downstream licensees alike. | ||||
|  | @ -3038,7 +3038,7 @@ including small businesses and schools, and had only recently been | |||
| promoted for use in the home.}. | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| However, Magnuson-Moss is not a perfect fit because in the area of components | ||||
| of dwellings, the settled interpretation under Magnuson-Moss under-inclusive. | ||||
| of dwellings, the settled interpretation under Magnuson-Moss is under-inclusive. | ||||
| Depending on how such components are manufactured or sold, they may or may | ||||
| not be considered Magnuson-Moss consumer products.\footnote{Building | ||||
|   materials that are purchased directly by a consumer from a retailer, for | ||||
|  | @ -4309,7 +4309,7 @@ embedded targets. Eventually, Cygnus was so successful that | |||
| it was purchased by Red Hat where it remains a profitable division. | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| However, there are very small companies that compete in | ||||
| this space. Because the code-base is protect by the GPL, it creates and | ||||
| this space. Because the code-base is protected by the GPL, it creates and | ||||
| demands industry trust. Companies can cooperate on the software and | ||||
| improve it for everyone. Meanwhile, companies who rely on GCC for their | ||||
| work are happy to pay for improvements, and for ports to new target | ||||
|  | @ -4357,7 +4357,7 @@ admittedly to the dismay of FSF, many modern and complex software | |||
| systems are built using both proprietary and GPL'd components that are | ||||
| not legally derivative works of each other. Sometimes, it is easier simply to | ||||
| improve existing GPL'd application than to start from scratch. In | ||||
| exchange for that benefit, the license requires that the modifier give | ||||
| exchange for that benefit, the license requires that the modifier gives | ||||
| back to the commons that made the work easier in the first place. It is a | ||||
| reasonable trade-off and a way to help build a better world while also | ||||
| making a profit. | ||||
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