enyst
f31235afbc
Possible fixes for incomplete or unclear phrases
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Signed-off-by: enyst <engel.nyst@gmail.com>
2014-09-19 18:09:45 -04:00
enyst
d638f60cd9
Fixes for typos
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Signed-off-by: enyst <engel.nyst@gmail.com>
2014-09-19 18:09:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8870e9097d
The word former just belabored this sentence.
2014-09-19 18:02:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b7bb47188f
Explain GPLv2 implicit private modification rights
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I've long been aware that GPLv2 "technically" governed private
modifications and that generally there were probably more requirements
on privately modified versions of GPLv2'd works than most people assumed
in practice, including commonly held public interpretation by FSF.
HT Wolvereness, who pointed out to me that GPLv3 solved that problem.
When I spoke to Fontana about it, he was indeed aware that this text was
"missing" in GPLv2 and that GPLv3 properly added it, through some
politics during the GPLv3 process.
I've added herein the ultimate historical conclusions about GPLv2's
interpretation and how GPLv3 clarified it. I've left out the color
about the politics of how it got added, not because they are not
interesting, relevant and germane to tutorial, but because we don't have
a good place yet in the tutorial for discussion of GPLv3 drafting
politics, and frankly if we have such a section, Fontana ought to write
it, not me.
2014-09-19 17:57:52 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3847ee1c1b
Add label for this section.
2014-09-19 17:57:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d982de460a
GPLv2§2 is for *distributing* modified versions.
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This text needs to be clear that GPLv2§2 doesn't govern merely the act
of modification, but distributing modified versions (in whole or in
part). The previous text here wasn't clear on that point.
2014-09-19 17:41:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e5ee0fd0a1
GPLv3 clarifies private modification permission.
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While both GPLv2 and GPLv3 have long been considered to grant unabridged
right to private modification, GPLv3 has much clearer and explicit
wording to this effect.
This should be noted when that paragraph is explained. This change
herein does that.
HT Wolvereness for pointing this difference between GPLv2 and GPLv3 out
to me.
2014-09-19 17:36:03 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
558297c9c1
Shorten this sentence a bit.
2014-09-17 18:35:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3e638118b8
Rework these two paragraphs.
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As previously written, these two paragraphs were saying very little with
a lot of words. I've attempted to rework it a bit.
2014-09-17 18:31:43 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
20361c3263
I don't think that While, belonged there anymore.
2014-09-17 18:25:46 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7d7f1ff75d
Reword to simpler text in this sentence.
2014-09-17 18:25:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4b49be8441
Create a README.md file.
2014-09-05 16:00:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b5b0e2403e
Opposite meaning was what was desired here.
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HT Bob Hogg for discovering this error.
2014-08-12 08:12:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1548847af9
Credit Martin with his copy editing work in each part.
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This required some page reformatting (fewer space skipping).
2014-04-24 19:26:02 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
e99208a5d2
Remove bogus? reference to Darvik
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The text talks about Bortez and suddenly there are two references to
Darvik.
2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
0bbf9ec882
Misc copy editing
2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
7648027275
Typo fixes
2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
85577d597a
Misc copy editing: fix some typos, grammar, and formatting errors
2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
74899d7d1c
Fix quotation marks so they show up in the text
2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
dfcd7ef4ae
Consistent usage of "noncommercial"
2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
6ba2ff285f
Add missing label
2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
0c48d8fdd3
Fix broken LaTeX ref commands
2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
f7211a9f8a
Fix broken LaTeX section commands
2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
63c5e1ac91
Remove extra blank line
2014-04-24 19:08:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2f63711c4a
Make the title fit.
2014-03-24 10:51:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
49b9913eff
fix rdquo;
2014-03-24 10:51:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4f740fc34b
Change to make it fit on the top.
2014-03-24 10:51:17 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3ed7c26e43
Merge branch 'cle-edits', which brings in Donald's copy-edit changes.
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There were minor conflicts in gpl-lgpl.tex.
2014-03-24 06:56:42 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a154325575
Remove blank line
2014-03-24 06:51:25 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2e12535c1d
Fix right quote.
2014-03-24 06:51:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cfedd6ed79
Add GPL ending slide
2014-03-24 06:51:13 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f0bb2c8b17
Formatting fixes.
2014-03-24 06:39:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
76bd5d44b9
Corresponding source definition on a slide, and related definitions.
2014-03-24 06:39:43 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5b2a380bc6
GPLv3 § 6(a-b) on a slide
2014-03-24 06:36:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9cd40221e0
GPLv2 § 3(a-b)
2014-03-24 06:33:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
64e4459121
Add GPLv3 definitions and slide explaining binaries
2014-03-24 06:30:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bc979d12b0
Add GPLv3 section 5
2014-03-24 06:29:52 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dd548108f3
Fix spacing on title.
2014-03-24 06:29:39 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
189bc1b382
Add GPLv2 section 2 onto a slide.
2014-03-24 06:07:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c5f70c98fe
Wrote a few more slides.
2014-03-24 05:58:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
485d114947
Fix the quote here.
2014-03-24 05:58:35 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b476b9553f
Rework indenting on this slide.
2014-03-24 05:58:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d0d580ca8e
Rework indenting on this slide.
2014-03-24 05:58:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
83802ddde8
Cut some verbosity here.
2014-03-24 05:58:12 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3319284040
Rework indenting on this slide.
2014-03-24 05:58:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
14e09b0b18
This should not be plural, and an shouldn't be in the quotes.
2014-03-24 05:56:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
579116b670
Technical gap slide.
2014-03-24 05:27:59 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
33aad22f7c
Write a few more slides.
2014-03-24 05:23:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1aa6388f5e
Add period here.
2014-03-24 05:23:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ffb2551c73
Poll the audience first to figure out how fast/slow to move.
2014-03-24 05:14:53 -04:00
