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Bradley M. Kuhn
dca1aa0115 "by definition" is clearer here than "by default"
There's probably another phrase we could use that's even better.
2015-03-09 19:03:53 -07:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0adba83923 FIXME re: "dynamic linking delayed" to runtime.
The existing text of the Guide hints at this point but doesn't discuss
it directly.  This FIXME is merely a reminder note to investigate this
issue in further detail and perhaps add text here on the question.
2014-12-23 13:22:05 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
eab5efb42b Null character needed at end of a LaTeX sentence. 2014-12-23 13:15:46 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
79c5b890eb Consolidate copyright notices into single place.
Historically, this project used (more-or-less) a file-by-file copyright
inventory.  This commit ends that practice.  The project now has a
single toplevel copyright inventory, stored exclusively in
comprehensive-gpl-guide.tex (so that it appears also in compiled
versions of the Guide as well).

The side-effect of this commit is that the parts may no longer be easily
publishable separably without (at least) the additional work of
copyright notice reconstruction.  This may in particular create a
challenge for the FSF, who has historically selectively published
sections of this Guide as materials for its CLE classes.

However, without this change, this Guide will eventually suffer from the
inherent problems in maintaining file-by-file copyright inventory.
Circumstances simply dictate a single, top-level copyright and license
notice for the entire Guide.

In addition to consolidation of copyright notices, I've also herein
updated my historical copyright notices to properly credit me for my own
work done in 2003 through 2005.

I've also updated the license notice to reflect the changes made by the
previous commit and related issues.
2014-12-22 17:22:50 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ce9168a9af Citations of third-party works in appendix only.
As alluded to in 2ea19b71d4 's commit
message on 2014-12-17 19:52:15 -0500, keeping any information on a
part-by-part basis is difficult and error-prone, since there exists no
reliable way to auto-generate such information accurately.

Therefore, citations to third-party works, in addition to remaining
fully documented in the commit log as they always have been, are now
placed in specifically one location in the body of the text itself: a
single appendix specifically designed for that purpose.

In this manner, contributors have no house-keeping work regarding
citations.  Contributors need only list third party works and links in
one place: third-party-citations.tex.

Documentation in CONTRIBUTING.md for making contributions of third-party
works is left as a TODO.
2014-12-22 16:30:00 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1da1b24a14 Wordsmith sentence after phrase "such software".
I think Fontana's change a few commits back which s/it/such software/ in
this sentence is a useful one.  However, the entire sentence reads even
worse because "such software Free Software" looks so strange as a string
of words in the middle of the sentence.

This change is the best rework I could find that resolved the problem.
It's probably not the best option but is certainly an improvement.
2014-12-20 20:04:56 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c5866203ee Replace editorial commentary w/ FSF's link.
My personal comment here, which I wrote on 2003-05-26 (see
f05ce6c657 ), is probably not particularly
useful.  I still tend to use the phrasing as original stated in the
removed text herein; however, I'm admittedly the only one.  I don't deny
that I hope to coin some terminology usage through my work on this
Guide, but this particular use of "nonfree software" to mean
"noncommercially proprietary" is not so important IMO that this Guide
must coin it.

The FSF's page on this doesn't make that distinction, and has much more
detail on this issue than this section does.  Therefore, the
personal statement is removed, and the organizational statement on the
FSF's site is instead linked to.
2014-12-20 20:04:56 -05:00
Richard Fontana
628ffb6020 Some editorial changes.
Commenting on one: the initial-caps stylistic preference for "Free
Software" (though it contradicts prevailing usage, including that of RMS
and the FSF) ought to be respected, but I think it is confusing to
capitalize the 'S' when referring to nonfree software as "non-Free
Software". So I changed this to "non-Free software" and also implicitly
acknowledged that the preference for "non-Free" over "nonfree" is the
editor-in-chief's stylistic idiosyncrasy.
2014-12-20 20:04:56 -05:00
Richard Fontana
170f507ac6 Some editorial changes. 2014-12-20 20:04:56 -05:00
Richard Fontana
dab88657a4 "GNU project" -> "GNU Project". 2014-12-20 20:04:56 -05:00
Richard Fontana
ff7790d608 "business people" -> "businesspeople" 2014-12-20 20:04:56 -05:00
Andrew Engelbrecht
daced43610 move long parenthetical text out of short sentence
it's easier to read this way.
2014-12-20 19:22:44 -05:00
Andrew Engelbrecht
5879dd3344 correct literal meaning of phrase
GPL protected code-bases don't demand industry trust, modern industry
trusts GPL protected code-bases.
2014-12-20 18:49:36 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b0801a2b8a Clarify sentence.
Make this sentence a bit clearer.
2014-12-19 19:09:01 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e01c6bf303 Remove spurious line.
This line was carried over as a paste from a previous version of the
paragraph above it, and is now no longer needed.
2014-12-17 23:34:50 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
48e517cb83 Additional published work.
This publish work was also referenced in the old commit logs already,
but now that we have a list in the work itself, it can also be listed
here.
2014-12-17 23:26:26 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
22fe0956db Add hyperlinks to remixed published works.
Now that a list of published works is part of the document proper, it is
reasonably practicable to add hyperlinks to those works.
2014-12-17 23:21:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2ea19b71d4 Remove incomplete lists of authors entirely.
The lists of authors in each part has been continually out of date and
incomplete.  There are multiple examples, here are a few:

  * In September 2005, John Sullivan made improvements and was not placed on
    the Authors lists until I did so in a March 2014 commit.

  * In March 2014, Martin Michlmayr submitted many patches, but was not
    placed on the Authors lists until I did so in an April 2014 commit.

There is no easy way to keep these Authors lists current, and they aren't
necessary under CC-BY-SA-4.0 anyway, so I herein remove the Authors lists.
Additionally, previous commit added "published sources" in each part, which
is more static and easier to keep up to date and provides similar
information.
2014-12-17 19:52:15 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3605394f30 List published works & link to Git logs.
References and details regarding these published works from which some
text was incorporated already appeared in the commit logs in great
detail.  The information, already fully available in the Guide's Git
logs in full compliance with CC-BY-SA-4.0 §3(a)(1-2), now appears in
summary form additionally in the compiled PDF/HTML/Postscript output.
2014-12-17 18:33:10 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
312718cda0 it's is 2014-11-16 10:38:12 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
a5fa6ca556 2 paras in a row start with However, 2014-11-16 10:38:12 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
b35e89a8d8 more powerful interest*s* implicitly allied 2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
a867743eb3 para prohibit*s* anyone 2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
784976f1e3 consistent singular 2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
38329c1b5a "an set" 2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
126d4fc041 cap The in middle of sentence 2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
b8ec5dbbe9 it indicate*s* 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
5f18dfd82f add needed connecting word/punctuation 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
4b25ade520 two "Furthermore..." sentences in a row 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
e52a3d32dc relate sections -> related sections 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
5084f8b60f disparate not desperate views 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
057263d799 "would sometimes allowing distributors" 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
26c0a26169 "designed as part to permit" -> "designed to permit" 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
706e29388f consistent plural examples 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
5bc731e260 "includes with particular examples" drop "with" 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
95ff20c420 "rather bulk term" -> "rather bulky term" 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
9641e72df0 consistent fn follows punctuation 2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
37bdf9cadd typos/extra words 2014-11-16 10:35:50 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
d3f9715bce "because GPLv2~\S2(b)" with nothing following doesn't work in discussion of that section, removed 2014-11-16 10:35:50 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
fcb21b4a38 "does grants such permission" 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
468946040b "the Maryland" 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
dd20a395b7 not all cc sharealike licenses are copyleft, so be specific
automatic relicensing is an exaggeration
cc by-sa case is even more nuanced, briefly mention in fn
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
652ff19285 ultimately is superfluous, fix typo 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
2a390dd465 "other or additional" redundant 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
241bdebac0 all four freedoms are necessary 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
e665db106e yet again, software not the giver 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
4dfdaa4fac software != granting actor again 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
913a5f4940 programs are not actors 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
abff2d8c4a incorrect plural 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
e449a1c3ab "successfully benefit" is redundant 2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00