Wordsmith sentence after phrase "such software".

I think Fontana's change a few commits back which s/it/such software/ in
this sentence is a useful one.  However, the entire sentence reads even
worse because "such software Free Software" looks so strange as a string
of words in the middle of the sentence.

This change is the best rework I could find that resolved the problem.
It's probably not the best option but is certainly an improvement.
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Bradley M. Kuhn 2014-12-20 20:02:10 -05:00
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@ -178,8 +178,9 @@ Section~\ref{Proprietary Relicensing} talks in detail about how
this can unfortunately happen even if a program is released under the GPL\@.
Many people refer to software with these freedoms as ``Open Source.''
Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software Free
Software,\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software
Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software
by the name ``Free
Software'',\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software
Movement and the Open Source Movement are documented on FSF's Web site at
\url{http://www.fsf.org/licensing/essays/free-software-for-freedom.html}.},
those who call the software ``Open Source'' are often focused on a side