Wordsmith sentence after phrase "such software".
I think Fontana's change a few commits back which s/it/such software/ in this sentence is a useful one. However, the entire sentence reads even worse because "such software Free Software" looks so strange as a string of words in the middle of the sentence. This change is the best rework I could find that resolved the problem. It's probably not the best option but is certainly an improvement.
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this can unfortunately happen even if a program is released under the GPL\@.
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Many people refer to software with these freedoms as ``Open Source.''
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Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software Free
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Software,\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software
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Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software
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by the name ``Free
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Software'',\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software
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Movement and the Open Source Movement are documented on FSF's Web site at
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\url{http://www.fsf.org/licensing/essays/free-software-for-freedom.html}.},
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those who call the software ``Open Source'' are often focused on a side
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