From 1da1b24a14397b2ba60dbabf51821a66f3239d9e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Bradley M. Kuhn" Date: Sat, 20 Dec 2014 20:02:10 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Wordsmith sentence after phrase "such software". I think Fontana's change a few commits back which s/it/such software/ in this sentence is a useful one. However, the entire sentence reads even worse because "such software Free Software" looks so strange as a string of words in the middle of the sentence. This change is the best rework I could find that resolved the problem. It's probably not the best option but is certainly an improvement. --- gpl-lgpl.tex | 5 +++-- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/gpl-lgpl.tex b/gpl-lgpl.tex index 90807eb..4ce4dad 100644 --- a/gpl-lgpl.tex +++ b/gpl-lgpl.tex @@ -178,8 +178,9 @@ Section~\ref{Proprietary Relicensing} talks in detail about how this can unfortunately happen even if a program is released under the GPL\@. Many people refer to software with these freedoms as ``Open Source.'' -Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software Free -Software,\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software +Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software +by the name ``Free +Software'',\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software Movement and the Open Source Movement are documented on FSF's Web site at \url{http://www.fsf.org/licensing/essays/free-software-for-freedom.html}.}, those who call the software ``Open Source'' are often focused on a side