Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								cea2bde2d5 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Finish section.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:48 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								9683b6ed0f 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Move one paragraph around, and revise another.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:45 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								8e06bdea08 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Finish Section 9.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:44 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								b3ec650424 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Termination section rewrite.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:38 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								d7bff4baa5 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Comment out this text for now.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								96735e78d0 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								bb29c91417 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:28 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								dc7f0fea56 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrite text on GPLv3§7.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								cfde3638b1 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Redraft paragraph.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								168594f3c2 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rename section  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								7584fb1122 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								I think this text won't be useful.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								8cd5c5e373 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrite  paragraph.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:22 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								06178c3fb2 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Move this section on License Compatibility here.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:21 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								110f9ece93 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								c28313b014 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								27ec9cecb9 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Finish up Installation Information section.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-21 12:53:19 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								b00ddaa698 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrite material on Installation Information, put it into sections.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 17:59:48 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								b3e528a31c 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Various changes to make all that Magnuson-Moss verbiage useful to the tutorial.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 17:46:00 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								10244bee14 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Purely formatting changes.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 17:38:34 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								aa15f936ce 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Fontana noted that I edited this poorly the first time,  
							
							... 
							
							
							
							likely due in my haste to make a funny commit message:
<fontana> bkuhn: I think there's an editing problem in that change
<bkuhn> fontana: I was showing you the commit message more than the content
<bkuhn> are you saying I made an editing erro[r]?
<fontana> yes 
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 17:36:31 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								b17d0710ac 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Reword paragraph.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 17:34:09 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								cee78c87ef 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								This change does the job that needs to be done to this ¶ for this tutorial.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 17:29:51 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								579704541d 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Reword some of this and remove FIXME.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 17:27:04 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								dd9e082222 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrote paragraph.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 17:24:41 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								4623ebe2ec 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Reword this paragraph that was just moved here.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 17:24:31 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								8ca2d66685 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Move this paragraph to the right place.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 17:23:58 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								a83760dcc7 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrote this paragraph, removing much which wasn't useful.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 17:19:40 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								f53db9025a 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Remove FIXME and add subsection  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 16:42:02 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								7390b7c0f9 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								This text was so old (from the earliest drafts) that it was not particularly useful.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 16:23:20 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								2145ca8186 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								This text is no longer useful.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 16:22:24 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								f3caa4bf6b 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								More fine-tuned changes to s/Open Source/Free Software/g.  
							
							... 
							
							
							
							While I liked Donald's changes in the previous commit enough to take them,
and I don't agree with SFLC's (who was the last to edit those words in this
document) preference for "FOSS", I did want to make some fine tuned changes
that I think are appropriate:
  * say "software freedom" rather than "Free Software" anywhere it fits the
    sentence.
  * Capitalize "Free Software" like that, rather than lower case as Donald's
    change did.
  * Say "copylefted" in a few places where that was the stronger implication.
  * Say "Open Source" in two specific places where the intention is to
    include OSI-approved licenses that may not be Free Software licenses. 
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 16:08:59 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Donald Robertson, III 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								957fff699c 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								FLOSS to free software  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 16:02:03 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								6d5ca098a1 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Reword these two paragraphs.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 15:40:18 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								5111178260 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrite paragraph.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 15:35:58 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								8faf96d5e5 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrite this paragraph.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 15:25:35 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								dac68d1410 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								This material was accidentally pasted down with GPLv3§7 stuff,  
							
							... 
							
							
							
							but it's for GPLv3§6. 
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 15:21:49 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								9de90679bb 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrite this paragraph on GPLv3§6(d)  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 15:16:08 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								a5079818d4 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrite description of GPLv3~\S6(d).  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 15:11:44 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Joshua Gay 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								bdb224a606 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Replaced "GPL" with "the GPL" wherever it was used to refer to the license,  
							
							... 
							
							
							
							but *not* when used when referring to GPL'd software or GPL violation or GPL
enforcement, etc. 
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 14:51:42 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Joshua Gay 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								aef1ac14b3 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Spellcheck  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 14:46:36 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								b7dfcb2372 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Add missing word.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 14:33:23 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								9bd27fcffe 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrote text for the final parts of GPLv3§5 and early parts of GPLv3§6.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 14:30:32 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								2b98827e56 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Missing period, and remove FIXME that's now fixed.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 13:20:12 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								8f33303a9f 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Move this stuff to the right place and get subsection number right.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 13:15:55 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								10b0ade5d5 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrote this sentence for tutorial context.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 13:12:54 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								df7c046d04 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Merge in this last paragraph in this section.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 13:00:43 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Donald Robertson, III 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								a8b25085c2 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								changed modified GPL note to say explanation instead of additional permission  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 12:52:39 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								82f2c66198 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								number agreement.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 12:36:02 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								3465a2dd60 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Rewrite this paragraph to fit the tutorial.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 12:35:55 -04:00 
							
								 
							
						 
					 
				
					
						
							
								
								
									Bradley M. Kuhn 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
							
							
								
							
							
								2cfbed706c 
								
							 
						 
						
							
							
								
								Merge in text and do rewrites for description of GPLv3§4.  
							
							
							
						 
						
							2014-03-20 12:33:49 -04:00