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Bradley M. Kuhn
929f60c316 Wordsmith this paragraph 2014-03-21 12:54:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
de3e1df167 Wordsmith paragraph 2014-03-21 12:54:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6e61ea8545 Correct paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:54:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ce71c2fc8c Wordsmith paragraph and correct for accuracy. 2014-03-21 12:54:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e8cd9043d3 Wordsmith two paragraphs. 2014-03-21 12:54:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d9035896ff Wordsmith this paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:54:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
31118ec3c1 Removed some specific company names from here, particularly because the
information is somewhat out of date.
2014-03-21 12:54:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
be829a5f2a m-dash 2014-03-21 12:54:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4e4919167e Proprietary relicensing comment. 2014-03-21 12:54:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ab4861b27e Spell check. 2014-03-21 12:54:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
730a079cc7 Comment out these sections. 2014-03-21 12:54:15 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
56382c650a Fix to what really happened. 2014-03-21 12:54:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3224b6aef3 GPLv3§14. 2014-03-21 12:54:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0c96a3bb7d Affero GPL section, not doing this justice now, but this is good enough to
print for Monday's class.
2014-03-21 12:54:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8bd2bbc58d Wrote and merged text for GPLv3§12 2014-03-21 12:53:56 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6f718b34bb Correct ' signs in these places. 2014-03-21 12:53:55 -04:00
Tony Sebro
a394bce20f Made final edits to Implied Patent License section 2014-03-21 12:53:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
859cfccca7 Resolve all undefined reference. 2014-03-21 12:53:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
296b733311 Do not really need a section break here. 2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
71b8aa67c9 I still love to write texit. 2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
539cc5e81b Rewrite the entire Patent section.
Much of this text, pasted from various different rationale documents, deals
with issues that either changed in later drafts, or is focused on various
minutia about the Microsoft/Novell deal that seems in retrospect rather
unimportant for many reasons.

Hopefully what I've cut down to is the bare essentials of what's needed to
explain the patent section of GPLv3 to a newbie.  I suspect that I'll want
later to go over this and add more material or reword things further.

I've added a few FIXME-LATER's for that reason.
2014-03-21 12:53:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cea2bde2d5 Finish section. 2014-03-21 12:53:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9683b6ed0f Move one paragraph around, and revise another. 2014-03-21 12:53:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8e06bdea08 Finish Section 9. 2014-03-21 12:53:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3ec650424 Termination section rewrite. 2014-03-21 12:53:38 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d7bff4baa5 Comment out this text for now. 2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
96735e78d0 Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs. 2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bb29c91417 Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later. 2014-03-21 12:53:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dc7f0fea56 Rewrite text on GPLv3§7. 2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cfde3638b1 Redraft paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
168594f3c2 Rename section 2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7584fb1122 I think this text won't be useful. 2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8cd5c5e373 Rewrite paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:53:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
06178c3fb2 Move this section on License Compatibility here. 2014-03-21 12:53:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
110f9ece93 Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions. 2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c28313b014 Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions. 2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
27ec9cecb9 Finish up Installation Information section. 2014-03-21 12:53:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b00ddaa698 Rewrite material on Installation Information, put it into sections. 2014-03-20 17:59:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3e528a31c Various changes to make all that Magnuson-Moss verbiage useful to the tutorial. 2014-03-20 17:46:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10244bee14 Purely formatting changes. 2014-03-20 17:38:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
aa15f936ce Fontana noted that I edited this poorly the first time,
likely due in my haste to make a funny commit message:

<fontana> bkuhn: I think there's an editing problem in that change
<bkuhn> fontana: I was showing you the commit message more than the content
<bkuhn> are you saying I made an editing erro[r]?
<fontana> yes
2014-03-20 17:36:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b17d0710ac Reword paragraph. 2014-03-20 17:34:09 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cee78c87ef This change does the job that needs to be done to this ¶ for this tutorial. 2014-03-20 17:29:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
579704541d Reword some of this and remove FIXME. 2014-03-20 17:27:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dd9e082222 Rewrote paragraph. 2014-03-20 17:24:41 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4623ebe2ec Reword this paragraph that was just moved here. 2014-03-20 17:24:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca2d66685 Move this paragraph to the right place. 2014-03-20 17:23:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a83760dcc7 Rewrote this paragraph, removing much which wasn't useful. 2014-03-20 17:19:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f53db9025a Remove FIXME and add subsection 2014-03-20 16:42:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7390b7c0f9 This text was so old (from the earliest drafts) that it was not particularly useful. 2014-03-20 16:23:20 -04:00