Bradley M. Kuhn
312e3f7e92
Correct paragraph.
2014-03-20 21:07:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2df193b0e9
Wordsmith paragraph and correct for accuracy.
2014-03-20 21:06:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
769dfdbd14
Wordsmith two paragraphs.
2014-03-20 21:04:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
634c64727e
Wordsmith this paragraph.
2014-03-20 21:02:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a7ffbb9ee5
Removed some specific company names from here, particularly because the
...
information is somewhat out of date.
2014-03-20 21:00:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8e5a381028
m-dash
2014-03-20 20:57:13 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0117799b69
Proprietary relicensing comment.
2014-03-20 20:57:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
16917f85a2
Spell check.
2014-03-20 20:56:36 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ceccb45e25
Comment out these sections.
2014-03-20 20:49:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b494e0cc66
Fix to what really happened.
2014-03-20 20:49:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
596878284d
GPLv3§14.
2014-03-20 20:48:15 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f8a9199284
Affero GPL section, not doing this justice now, but this is good enough to
...
print for Monday's class.
2014-03-20 20:46:27 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3878521bbf
Wrote and merged text for GPLv3§12
2014-03-20 20:39:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f491e35882
Correct ' signs in these places.
2014-03-20 20:36:14 -04:00
Tony Sebro
b5b0571a6a
Made final edits to Implied Patent License section
2014-03-20 20:35:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9dc94d5869
Resolve all undefined reference.
2014-03-20 20:34:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4f266baa97
Do not really need a section break here.
2014-03-20 20:31:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0ffabed0e0
I still love to write texit.
2014-03-20 20:30:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5c1a943df9
Rewrite the entire Patent section.
...
Much of this text, pasted from various different rationale documents, deals
with issues that either changed in later drafts, or is focused on various
minutia about the Microsoft/Novell deal that seems in retrospect rather
unimportant for many reasons.
Hopefully what I've cut down to is the bare essentials of what's needed to
explain the patent section of GPLv3 to a newbie. I suspect that I'll want
later to go over this and add more material or reword things further.
I've added a few FIXME-LATER's for that reason.
2014-03-20 20:30:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7940504216
Finish section.
2014-03-20 18:57:14 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a5bf35174c
Move one paragraph around, and revise another.
2014-03-20 18:55:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d09f5f3e2a
Finish Section 9.
2014-03-20 18:52:01 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c6a0465a65
Termination section rewrite.
2014-03-20 18:50:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4f31de2b98
Comment out this text for now.
2014-03-20 18:28:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
82a504a115
Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs.
2014-03-20 18:28:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5963e0d131
Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later.
2014-03-20 18:26:42 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a03479ec1b
Rewrite text on GPLv3§7.
2014-03-20 18:25:39 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
017c6ae1b5
Redraft paragraph.
2014-03-20 18:18:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
751992a932
Rename section
2014-03-20 18:18:37 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a024a36067
I think this text won't be useful.
2014-03-20 18:18:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c4ced9c93f
Rewrite paragraph.
2014-03-20 18:16:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
98ae3aaac2
Move this section on License Compatibility here.
2014-03-20 18:16:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
263dd1e086
Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions.
2014-03-20 18:15:11 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2aa2613611
Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions.
2014-03-20 18:10:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
678c1d8099
Finish up Installation Information section.
2014-03-20 18:08:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b00ddaa698
Rewrite material on Installation Information, put it into sections.
2014-03-20 17:59:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3e528a31c
Various changes to make all that Magnuson-Moss verbiage useful to the tutorial.
2014-03-20 17:46:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10244bee14
Purely formatting changes.
2014-03-20 17:38:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
aa15f936ce
Fontana noted that I edited this poorly the first time,
...
likely due in my haste to make a funny commit message:
<fontana> bkuhn: I think there's an editing problem in that change
<bkuhn> fontana: I was showing you the commit message more than the content
<bkuhn> are you saying I made an editing erro[r]?
<fontana> yes
2014-03-20 17:36:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b17d0710ac
Reword paragraph.
2014-03-20 17:34:09 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cee78c87ef
This change does the job that needs to be done to this ¶ for this tutorial.
2014-03-20 17:29:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
579704541d
Reword some of this and remove FIXME.
2014-03-20 17:27:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dd9e082222
Rewrote paragraph.
2014-03-20 17:24:41 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4623ebe2ec
Reword this paragraph that was just moved here.
2014-03-20 17:24:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca2d66685
Move this paragraph to the right place.
2014-03-20 17:23:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a83760dcc7
Rewrote this paragraph, removing much which wasn't useful.
2014-03-20 17:19:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f53db9025a
Remove FIXME and add subsection
2014-03-20 16:42:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7390b7c0f9
This text was so old (from the earliest drafts) that it was not particularly useful.
2014-03-20 16:23:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2145ca8186
This text is no longer useful.
2014-03-20 16:22:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f3caa4bf6b
More fine-tuned changes to s/Open Source/Free Software/g.
...
While I liked Donald's changes in the previous commit enough to take them,
and I don't agree with SFLC's (who was the last to edit those words in this
document) preference for "FOSS", I did want to make some fine tuned changes
that I think are appropriate:
* say "software freedom" rather than "Free Software" anywhere it fits the
sentence.
* Capitalize "Free Software" like that, rather than lower case as Donald's
change did.
* Say "copylefted" in a few places where that was the stronger implication.
* Say "Open Source" in two specific places where the intention is to
include OSI-approved licenses that may not be Free Software licenses.
2014-03-20 16:08:59 -04:00
