Bradley M. Kuhn
d7bff4baa5
Comment out this text for now.
2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
96735e78d0
Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs.
2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bb29c91417
Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later.
2014-03-21 12:53:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dc7f0fea56
Rewrite text on GPLv3§7.
2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cfde3638b1
Redraft paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
168594f3c2
Rename section
2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7584fb1122
I think this text won't be useful.
2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8cd5c5e373
Rewrite paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:53:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
06178c3fb2
Move this section on License Compatibility here.
2014-03-21 12:53:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
110f9ece93
Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions.
2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c28313b014
Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions.
2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
27ec9cecb9
Finish up Installation Information section.
2014-03-21 12:53:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b00ddaa698
Rewrite material on Installation Information, put it into sections.
2014-03-20 17:59:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3e528a31c
Various changes to make all that Magnuson-Moss verbiage useful to the tutorial.
2014-03-20 17:46:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10244bee14
Purely formatting changes.
2014-03-20 17:38:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
aa15f936ce
Fontana noted that I edited this poorly the first time,
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likely due in my haste to make a funny commit message:
<fontana> bkuhn: I think there's an editing problem in that change
<bkuhn> fontana: I was showing you the commit message more than the content
<bkuhn> are you saying I made an editing erro[r]?
<fontana> yes
2014-03-20 17:36:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b17d0710ac
Reword paragraph.
2014-03-20 17:34:09 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cee78c87ef
This change does the job that needs to be done to this ¶ for this tutorial.
2014-03-20 17:29:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
579704541d
Reword some of this and remove FIXME.
2014-03-20 17:27:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dd9e082222
Rewrote paragraph.
2014-03-20 17:24:41 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4623ebe2ec
Reword this paragraph that was just moved here.
2014-03-20 17:24:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca2d66685
Move this paragraph to the right place.
2014-03-20 17:23:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a83760dcc7
Rewrote this paragraph, removing much which wasn't useful.
2014-03-20 17:19:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f53db9025a
Remove FIXME and add subsection
2014-03-20 16:42:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7390b7c0f9
This text was so old (from the earliest drafts) that it was not particularly useful.
2014-03-20 16:23:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2145ca8186
This text is no longer useful.
2014-03-20 16:22:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6d5ca098a1
Reword these two paragraphs.
2014-03-20 15:40:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5111178260
Rewrite paragraph.
2014-03-20 15:35:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8faf96d5e5
Rewrite this paragraph.
2014-03-20 15:25:35 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dac68d1410
This material was accidentally pasted down with GPLv3§7 stuff,
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but it's for GPLv3§6.
2014-03-20 15:21:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9de90679bb
Rewrite this paragraph on GPLv3§6(d)
2014-03-20 15:16:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a5079818d4
Rewrite description of GPLv3~\S6(d).
2014-03-20 15:11:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b7dfcb2372
Add missing word.
2014-03-20 14:33:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9bd27fcffe
Rewrote text for the final parts of GPLv3§5 and early parts of GPLv3§6.
2014-03-20 14:30:32 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2b98827e56
Missing period, and remove FIXME that's now fixed.
2014-03-20 13:20:12 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8f33303a9f
Move this stuff to the right place and get subsection number right.
2014-03-20 13:15:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10b0ade5d5
Rewrote this sentence for tutorial context.
2014-03-20 13:12:54 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
df7c046d04
Merge in this last paragraph in this section.
2014-03-20 13:00:43 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
82f2c66198
number agreement.
2014-03-20 12:36:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3465a2dd60
Rewrite this paragraph to fit the tutorial.
2014-03-20 12:35:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2cfbed706c
Merge in text and do rewrites for description of GPLv3§4.
2014-03-20 12:33:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
360d6057f1
Rename chapters that look oddly named when formatted in fncychap's Conny.
2014-03-20 10:12:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7a755cf4cb
Correct various references and labels to consistency.
2014-03-20 10:11:47 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ee9e86642a
Properly update and format copyright notices and title pages.
2014-03-20 09:59:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ed2f3b21d0
Merge in (with rewrites) this additional text on GPLv3§3 into tutorial.
2014-03-20 09:44:03 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
08c38c104d
Rewrite material describing GPLv3§3 into tutorial text.
2014-03-20 09:41:54 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9f6175cf73
This should be a subsection.
2014-03-20 09:34:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6faa16d457
Use \S here.
2014-03-20 09:34:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca0ae7ccd
Introductory paragraph to section on GPLv3§3.
2014-03-20 09:34:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0be18ce192
Label section and link it up to other mentions of DRM
2014-03-20 09:27:02 -04:00