Bradley M. Kuhn
b0801a2b8a
Clarify sentence.
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Make this sentence a bit clearer.
2014-12-19 19:09:01 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e01c6bf303
Remove spurious line.
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This line was carried over as a paste from a previous version of the
paragraph above it, and is now no longer needed.
2014-12-17 23:34:50 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6a0567ac6f
Make descriptions uniform.
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Descriptions in this list should be uniformly worded.
2014-12-17 23:31:39 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
48e517cb83
Additional published work.
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This publish work was also referenced in the old commit logs already,
but now that we have a list in the work itself, it can also be listed
here.
2014-12-17 23:26:26 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bd80fd4703
List missing co-author on this published work.
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Karen Sandler was co-author of the work herein referenced, and was
accidentally left off the list of authors in an earlier commit.
2014-12-17 23:24:59 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
22fe0956db
Add hyperlinks to remixed published works.
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Now that a list of published works is part of the document proper, it is
reasonably practicable to add hyperlinks to those works.
2014-12-17 23:21:07 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b75c05d7bb
Provide additional href link command.
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Add additional command that can be used in place of href where
appropriate.
2014-12-17 23:11:56 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2ea19b71d4
Remove incomplete lists of authors entirely.
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The lists of authors in each part has been continually out of date and
incomplete. There are multiple examples, here are a few:
* In September 2005, John Sullivan made improvements and was not placed on
the Authors lists until I did so in a March 2014 commit.
* In March 2014, Martin Michlmayr submitted many patches, but was not
placed on the Authors lists until I did so in an April 2014 commit.
There is no easy way to keep these Authors lists current, and they aren't
necessary under CC-BY-SA-4.0 anyway, so I herein remove the Authors lists.
Additionally, previous commit added "published sources" in each part, which
is more static and easier to keep up to date and provides similar
information.
2014-12-17 19:52:15 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3605394f30
List published works & link to Git logs.
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References and details regarding these published works from which some
text was incorporated already appeared in the commit logs in great
detail. The information, already fully available in the Guide's Git
logs in full compliance with CC-BY-SA-4.0 §3(a)(1-2), now appears in
summary form additionally in the compiled PDF/HTML/Postscript output.
2014-12-17 18:33:10 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
19c75b012c
Link to sponsors.
2014-12-02 20:49:50 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
251bcc6947
Typo fix.
2014-12-02 20:48:42 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
30e4942891
Reword paragraph; Include ref: "standard requests"
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Mostly these changes are wordsmith, but I added a note that violators
should ask for the "standard requests" for compliance to be adequate.
2014-11-19 12:56:28 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b9f7a402a6
Rewrite paragraph for readability.
2014-11-19 12:53:29 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
39ead95e9b
Rewrite paragraph to fix better with section.
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This paragraph was from text brought through from another document, and
as such, while this section was built "around it", the text itself was
stylistically different and otherwise problematic. This change brings
it into form with the rest of the document.
2014-11-19 12:48:45 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3e88116a43
Small grammar fix.
2014-11-19 12:46:15 -05:00
Martin Michlmayr
cbfa27466e
Update references to gitorious repo
2014-11-16 11:10:38 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
5ffc615320
Reword mind-reading statements.
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Merge requested proposed by @mlinksva has been changed slightly by
@bkuhn because there were changes to the README.md file since the
merge request was submitted that made some of the changes moot.
2014-11-16 11:01:54 -05:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b920a7a4b8
Change links to copyleft.org site (now it exists)
2014-11-16 10:55:46 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
312718cda0
it's is
2014-11-16 10:38:12 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
a5fa6ca556
2 paras in a row start with However,
2014-11-16 10:38:12 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
b35e89a8d8
more powerful interest*s* implicitly allied
2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
a867743eb3
para prohibit*s* anyone
2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
784976f1e3
consistent singular
2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
38329c1b5a
"an set"
2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
126d4fc041
cap The in middle of sentence
2014-11-16 10:38:11 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
b8ec5dbbe9
it indicate*s*
2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
5f18dfd82f
add needed connecting word/punctuation
2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
4b25ade520
two "Furthermore..." sentences in a row
2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
e52a3d32dc
relate sections -> related sections
2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
5084f8b60f
disparate not desperate views
2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
057263d799
"would sometimes allowing distributors"
2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
26c0a26169
"designed as part to permit" -> "designed to permit"
2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
706e29388f
consistent plural examples
2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
5bc731e260
"includes with particular examples" drop "with"
2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
95ff20c420
"rather bulk term" -> "rather bulky term"
2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
9641e72df0
consistent fn follows punctuation
2014-11-16 10:37:45 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
37bdf9cadd
typos/extra words
2014-11-16 10:35:50 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
d3f9715bce
"because GPLv2~\S2(b)" with nothing following doesn't work in discussion of that section, removed
2014-11-16 10:35:50 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
fcb21b4a38
"does grants such permission"
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
468946040b
"the Maryland"
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
dd20a395b7
not all cc sharealike licenses are copyleft, so be specific
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automatic relicensing is an exaggeration
cc by-sa case is even more nuanced, briefly mention in fn
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
652ff19285
ultimately is superfluous, fix typo
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
2a390dd465
"other or additional" redundant
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
241bdebac0
all four freedoms are necessary
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
e665db106e
yet again, software not the giver
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
4dfdaa4fac
software != granting actor again
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
913a5f4940
programs are not actors
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
abff2d8c4a
incorrect plural
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
e449a1c3ab
"successfully benefit" is redundant
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00
Mike Linksvayer
fc0e9f723e
"successful reader" an odd phrase and high bar for literacy
2014-11-16 10:32:41 -05:00