Bradley M. Kuhn
6e61ea8545
Correct paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:54:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ce71c2fc8c
Wordsmith paragraph and correct for accuracy.
2014-03-21 12:54:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e8cd9043d3
Wordsmith two paragraphs.
2014-03-21 12:54:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d9035896ff
Wordsmith this paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:54:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
31118ec3c1
Removed some specific company names from here, particularly because the
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information is somewhat out of date.
2014-03-21 12:54:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
be829a5f2a
m-dash
2014-03-21 12:54:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4e4919167e
Proprietary relicensing comment.
2014-03-21 12:54:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ab4861b27e
Spell check.
2014-03-21 12:54:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
730a079cc7
Comment out these sections.
2014-03-21 12:54:15 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
56382c650a
Fix to what really happened.
2014-03-21 12:54:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3224b6aef3
GPLv3§14.
2014-03-21 12:54:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0c96a3bb7d
Affero GPL section, not doing this justice now, but this is good enough to
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print for Monday's class.
2014-03-21 12:54:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8bd2bbc58d
Wrote and merged text for GPLv3§12
2014-03-21 12:53:56 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6f718b34bb
Correct ' signs in these places.
2014-03-21 12:53:55 -04:00
Tony Sebro
a394bce20f
Made final edits to Implied Patent License section
2014-03-21 12:53:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
859cfccca7
Resolve all undefined reference.
2014-03-21 12:53:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
296b733311
Do not really need a section break here.
2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
71b8aa67c9
I still love to write texit.
2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
539cc5e81b
Rewrite the entire Patent section.
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Much of this text, pasted from various different rationale documents, deals
with issues that either changed in later drafts, or is focused on various
minutia about the Microsoft/Novell deal that seems in retrospect rather
unimportant for many reasons.
Hopefully what I've cut down to is the bare essentials of what's needed to
explain the patent section of GPLv3 to a newbie. I suspect that I'll want
later to go over this and add more material or reword things further.
I've added a few FIXME-LATER's for that reason.
2014-03-21 12:53:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cea2bde2d5
Finish section.
2014-03-21 12:53:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9683b6ed0f
Move one paragraph around, and revise another.
2014-03-21 12:53:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8e06bdea08
Finish Section 9.
2014-03-21 12:53:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3ec650424
Termination section rewrite.
2014-03-21 12:53:38 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d7bff4baa5
Comment out this text for now.
2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
96735e78d0
Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs.
2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bb29c91417
Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later.
2014-03-21 12:53:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dc7f0fea56
Rewrite text on GPLv3§7.
2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cfde3638b1
Redraft paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
168594f3c2
Rename section
2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7584fb1122
I think this text won't be useful.
2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8cd5c5e373
Rewrite paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:53:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
06178c3fb2
Move this section on License Compatibility here.
2014-03-21 12:53:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
110f9ece93
Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions.
2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c28313b014
Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions.
2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
27ec9cecb9
Finish up Installation Information section.
2014-03-21 12:53:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b00ddaa698
Rewrite material on Installation Information, put it into sections.
2014-03-20 17:59:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3e528a31c
Various changes to make all that Magnuson-Moss verbiage useful to the tutorial.
2014-03-20 17:46:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10244bee14
Purely formatting changes.
2014-03-20 17:38:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
aa15f936ce
Fontana noted that I edited this poorly the first time,
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likely due in my haste to make a funny commit message:
<fontana> bkuhn: I think there's an editing problem in that change
<bkuhn> fontana: I was showing you the commit message more than the content
<bkuhn> are you saying I made an editing erro[r]?
<fontana> yes
2014-03-20 17:36:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b17d0710ac
Reword paragraph.
2014-03-20 17:34:09 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cee78c87ef
This change does the job that needs to be done to this ¶ for this tutorial.
2014-03-20 17:29:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
579704541d
Reword some of this and remove FIXME.
2014-03-20 17:27:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dd9e082222
Rewrote paragraph.
2014-03-20 17:24:41 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4623ebe2ec
Reword this paragraph that was just moved here.
2014-03-20 17:24:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca2d66685
Move this paragraph to the right place.
2014-03-20 17:23:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a83760dcc7
Rewrote this paragraph, removing much which wasn't useful.
2014-03-20 17:19:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f53db9025a
Remove FIXME and add subsection
2014-03-20 16:42:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7390b7c0f9
This text was so old (from the earliest drafts) that it was not particularly useful.
2014-03-20 16:23:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2145ca8186
This text is no longer useful.
2014-03-20 16:22:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f3caa4bf6b
More fine-tuned changes to s/Open Source/Free Software/g.
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While I liked Donald's changes in the previous commit enough to take them,
and I don't agree with SFLC's (who was the last to edit those words in this
document) preference for "FOSS", I did want to make some fine tuned changes
that I think are appropriate:
* say "software freedom" rather than "Free Software" anywhere it fits the
sentence.
* Capitalize "Free Software" like that, rather than lower case as Donald's
change did.
* Say "copylefted" in a few places where that was the stronger implication.
* Say "Open Source" in two specific places where the intention is to
include OSI-approved licenses that may not be Free Software licenses.
2014-03-20 16:08:59 -04:00
