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Bradley M. Kuhn
8e06bdea08 Finish Section 9. 2014-03-21 12:53:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3ec650424 Termination section rewrite. 2014-03-21 12:53:38 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d7bff4baa5 Comment out this text for now. 2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
96735e78d0 Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs. 2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bb29c91417 Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later. 2014-03-21 12:53:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dc7f0fea56 Rewrite text on GPLv3§7. 2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cfde3638b1 Redraft paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
168594f3c2 Rename section 2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7584fb1122 I think this text won't be useful. 2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8cd5c5e373 Rewrite paragraph. 2014-03-21 12:53:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
06178c3fb2 Move this section on License Compatibility here. 2014-03-21 12:53:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
110f9ece93 Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions. 2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c28313b014 Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions. 2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
27ec9cecb9 Finish up Installation Information section. 2014-03-21 12:53:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b00ddaa698 Rewrite material on Installation Information, put it into sections. 2014-03-20 17:59:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3e528a31c Various changes to make all that Magnuson-Moss verbiage useful to the tutorial. 2014-03-20 17:46:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10244bee14 Purely formatting changes. 2014-03-20 17:38:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
aa15f936ce Fontana noted that I edited this poorly the first time,
likely due in my haste to make a funny commit message:

<fontana> bkuhn: I think there's an editing problem in that change
<bkuhn> fontana: I was showing you the commit message more than the content
<bkuhn> are you saying I made an editing erro[r]?
<fontana> yes
2014-03-20 17:36:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b17d0710ac Reword paragraph. 2014-03-20 17:34:09 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cee78c87ef This change does the job that needs to be done to this ¶ for this tutorial. 2014-03-20 17:29:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
579704541d Reword some of this and remove FIXME. 2014-03-20 17:27:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dd9e082222 Rewrote paragraph. 2014-03-20 17:24:41 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4623ebe2ec Reword this paragraph that was just moved here. 2014-03-20 17:24:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca2d66685 Move this paragraph to the right place. 2014-03-20 17:23:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a83760dcc7 Rewrote this paragraph, removing much which wasn't useful. 2014-03-20 17:19:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f53db9025a Remove FIXME and add subsection 2014-03-20 16:42:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7390b7c0f9 This text was so old (from the earliest drafts) that it was not particularly useful. 2014-03-20 16:23:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2145ca8186 This text is no longer useful. 2014-03-20 16:22:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f3caa4bf6b More fine-tuned changes to s/Open Source/Free Software/g.
While I liked Donald's changes in the previous commit enough to take them,
and I don't agree with SFLC's (who was the last to edit those words in this
document) preference for "FOSS", I did want to make some fine tuned changes
that I think are appropriate:

  * say "software freedom" rather than "Free Software" anywhere it fits the
    sentence.

  * Capitalize "Free Software" like that, rather than lower case as Donald's
    change did.

  * Say "copylefted" in a few places where that was the stronger implication.

  * Say "Open Source" in two specific places where the intention is to
    include OSI-approved licenses that may not be Free Software licenses.
2014-03-20 16:08:59 -04:00
Donald Robertson, III
957fff699c FLOSS to free software 2014-03-20 16:02:03 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6d5ca098a1 Reword these two paragraphs. 2014-03-20 15:40:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5111178260 Rewrite paragraph. 2014-03-20 15:35:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8faf96d5e5 Rewrite this paragraph. 2014-03-20 15:25:35 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dac68d1410 This material was accidentally pasted down with GPLv3§7 stuff,
but it's for GPLv3§6.
2014-03-20 15:21:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9de90679bb Rewrite this paragraph on GPLv3§6(d) 2014-03-20 15:16:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a5079818d4 Rewrite description of GPLv3~\S6(d). 2014-03-20 15:11:44 -04:00
Joshua Gay
bdb224a606 Replaced "GPL" with "the GPL" wherever it was used to refer to the license,
but *not* when used when referring to GPL'd software or GPL violation or GPL
enforcement, etc.
2014-03-20 14:51:42 -04:00
Joshua Gay
aef1ac14b3 Spellcheck 2014-03-20 14:46:36 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b7dfcb2372 Add missing word. 2014-03-20 14:33:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9bd27fcffe Rewrote text for the final parts of GPLv3§5 and early parts of GPLv3§6. 2014-03-20 14:30:32 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2b98827e56 Missing period, and remove FIXME that's now fixed. 2014-03-20 13:20:12 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8f33303a9f Move this stuff to the right place and get subsection number right. 2014-03-20 13:15:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10b0ade5d5 Rewrote this sentence for tutorial context. 2014-03-20 13:12:54 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
df7c046d04 Merge in this last paragraph in this section. 2014-03-20 13:00:43 -04:00
Donald Robertson, III
a8b25085c2 changed modified GPL note to say explanation instead of additional permission 2014-03-20 12:52:39 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
82f2c66198 number agreement. 2014-03-20 12:36:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3465a2dd60 Rewrite this paragraph to fit the tutorial. 2014-03-20 12:35:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2cfbed706c Merge in text and do rewrites for description of GPLv3§4. 2014-03-20 12:33:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
360d6057f1 Rename chapters that look oddly named when formatted in fncychap's Conny. 2014-03-20 10:12:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7a755cf4cb Correct various references and labels to consistency. 2014-03-20 10:11:47 -04:00