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Bradley M. Kuhn
012aebd493 Move details of exclusive power to a footnote.
enyst was quite correct that more explanation was needed here about how
an entity achieves exclusive relicensing rights.  However, the details
are somewhat off-point to what the section is trying to explain, so the
details are best placed in a footnote.

I've also separated out copyright assignment from generating all of
one's own copyrights.  This may be a distinction without a difference,
but a laundry list seemed appropriate here.  Perhaps this should be
shortened in future.
2014-09-19 18:16:02 -04:00
enyst
831c21febb Strictly speaking, for proprietary relicensing 'only' unconditional permissions are needed.
Signed-off-by: enyst <engel.nyst@gmail.com>
2014-09-19 18:09:46 -04:00
enyst
f31235afbc Possible fixes for incomplete or unclear phrases
Signed-off-by: enyst <engel.nyst@gmail.com>
2014-09-19 18:09:45 -04:00
enyst
d638f60cd9 Fixes for typos
Signed-off-by: enyst <engel.nyst@gmail.com>
2014-09-19 18:09:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8870e9097d The word former just belabored this sentence. 2014-09-19 18:02:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b7bb47188f Explain GPLv2 implicit private modification rights
I've long been aware that GPLv2 "technically" governed private
modifications and that generally there were probably more requirements
on privately modified versions of GPLv2'd works than most people assumed
in practice, including commonly held public interpretation by FSF.

HT Wolvereness, who pointed out to me that GPLv3 solved that problem.
When I spoke to Fontana about it, he was indeed aware that this text was
"missing" in GPLv2 and that GPLv3 properly added it, through some
politics during the GPLv3 process.

I've added herein the ultimate historical conclusions about GPLv2's
interpretation and how GPLv3 clarified it.  I've left out the color
about the politics of how it got added, not because they are not
interesting, relevant and germane to tutorial, but because we don't have
a good place yet in the tutorial for discussion of GPLv3 drafting
politics, and frankly if we have such a section, Fontana ought to write
it, not me.
2014-09-19 17:57:52 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3847ee1c1b Add label for this section. 2014-09-19 17:57:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d982de460a GPLv2§2 is for *distributing* modified versions.
This text needs to be clear that GPLv2§2 doesn't govern merely the act
of modification, but distributing modified versions (in whole or in
part).  The previous text here wasn't clear on that point.
2014-09-19 17:41:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e5ee0fd0a1 GPLv3 clarifies private modification permission.
While both GPLv2 and GPLv3 have long been considered to grant unabridged
right to private modification, GPLv3 has much clearer and explicit
wording to this effect.

This should be noted when that paragraph is explained.  This change
herein does that.

HT Wolvereness for pointing this difference between GPLv2 and GPLv3 out
to me.
2014-09-19 17:36:03 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
558297c9c1 Shorten this sentence a bit. 2014-09-17 18:35:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3e638118b8 Rework these two paragraphs.
As previously written, these two paragraphs were saying very little with
a lot of words.  I've attempted to rework it a bit.
2014-09-17 18:31:43 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
20361c3263 I don't think that While, belonged there anymore. 2014-09-17 18:25:46 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7d7f1ff75d Reword to simpler text in this sentence. 2014-09-17 18:25:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4b49be8441 Create a README.md file. 2014-09-05 16:00:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b5b0e2403e Opposite meaning was what was desired here.
HT Bob Hogg for discovering this error.
2014-08-12 08:12:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1548847af9 Credit Martin with his copy editing work in each part.
This required some page reformatting (fewer space skipping).
2014-04-24 19:26:02 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
e99208a5d2 Remove bogus? reference to Darvik
The text talks about Bortez and suddenly there are two references to
Darvik.
2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
0bbf9ec882 Misc copy editing 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
7648027275 Typo fixes 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
85577d597a Misc copy editing: fix some typos, grammar, and formatting errors 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
74899d7d1c Fix quotation marks so they show up in the text 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
dfcd7ef4ae Consistent usage of "noncommercial" 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
6ba2ff285f Add missing label 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
0c48d8fdd3 Fix broken LaTeX ref commands 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Martin Michlmayr
f7211a9f8a Fix broken LaTeX section commands 2014-04-24 19:12:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
63c5e1ac91 Remove extra blank line 2014-04-24 19:08:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2f63711c4a Make the title fit. 2014-03-24 10:51:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
49b9913eff fix rdquo; 2014-03-24 10:51:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4f740fc34b Change to make it fit on the top. 2014-03-24 10:51:17 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3ed7c26e43 Merge branch 'cle-edits', which brings in Donald's copy-edit changes.
There were minor conflicts in gpl-lgpl.tex.
2014-03-24 06:56:42 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a154325575 Remove blank line 2014-03-24 06:51:25 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2e12535c1d Fix right quote. 2014-03-24 06:51:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cfedd6ed79 Add GPL ending slide 2014-03-24 06:51:13 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f0bb2c8b17 Formatting fixes. 2014-03-24 06:39:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
76bd5d44b9 Corresponding source definition on a slide, and related definitions. 2014-03-24 06:39:43 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5b2a380bc6 GPLv3 § 6(a-b) on a slide 2014-03-24 06:36:40 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9cd40221e0 GPLv2 § 3(a-b) 2014-03-24 06:33:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
64e4459121 Add GPLv3 definitions and slide explaining binaries 2014-03-24 06:30:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bc979d12b0 Add GPLv3 section 5 2014-03-24 06:29:52 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dd548108f3 Fix spacing on title. 2014-03-24 06:29:39 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
189bc1b382 Add GPLv2 section 2 onto a slide. 2014-03-24 06:07:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c5f70c98fe Wrote a few more slides. 2014-03-24 05:58:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
485d114947 Fix the quote here. 2014-03-24 05:58:35 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b476b9553f Rework indenting on this slide. 2014-03-24 05:58:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d0d580ca8e Rework indenting on this slide. 2014-03-24 05:58:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
83802ddde8 Cut some verbosity here. 2014-03-24 05:58:12 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3319284040 Rework indenting on this slide. 2014-03-24 05:58:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
14e09b0b18 This should not be plural, and an shouldn't be in the quotes. 2014-03-24 05:56:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
579116b670 Technical gap slide. 2014-03-24 05:27:59 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
33aad22f7c Write a few more slides. 2014-03-24 05:23:24 -04:00