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Bradley M. Kuhn
3c0b95de14 Wordsmith paragraph. 2014-03-20 21:17:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
595c64c158 Wordsmith paragraph. 2014-03-20 21:14:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ff37b833de Wordsmith this paragraph 2014-03-20 21:14:12 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b03ca7f6d5 Wordsmith paragraph 2014-03-20 21:08:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
312e3f7e92 Correct paragraph. 2014-03-20 21:07:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2df193b0e9 Wordsmith paragraph and correct for accuracy. 2014-03-20 21:06:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
769dfdbd14 Wordsmith two paragraphs. 2014-03-20 21:04:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
634c64727e Wordsmith this paragraph. 2014-03-20 21:02:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a7ffbb9ee5 Removed some specific company names from here, particularly because the
information is somewhat out of date.
2014-03-20 21:00:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8e5a381028 m-dash 2014-03-20 20:57:13 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0117799b69 Proprietary relicensing comment. 2014-03-20 20:57:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
16917f85a2 Spell check. 2014-03-20 20:56:36 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ceccb45e25 Comment out these sections. 2014-03-20 20:49:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b494e0cc66 Fix to what really happened. 2014-03-20 20:49:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
596878284d GPLv3§14. 2014-03-20 20:48:15 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f8a9199284 Affero GPL section, not doing this justice now, but this is good enough to
print for Monday's class.
2014-03-20 20:46:27 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3878521bbf Wrote and merged text for GPLv3§12 2014-03-20 20:39:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f491e35882 Correct ' signs in these places. 2014-03-20 20:36:14 -04:00
Tony Sebro
b5b0571a6a Made final edits to Implied Patent License section 2014-03-20 20:35:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9dc94d5869 Resolve all undefined reference. 2014-03-20 20:34:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4f266baa97 Do not really need a section break here. 2014-03-20 20:31:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0ffabed0e0 I still love to write texit. 2014-03-20 20:30:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5c1a943df9 Rewrite the entire Patent section.
Much of this text, pasted from various different rationale documents, deals
with issues that either changed in later drafts, or is focused on various
minutia about the Microsoft/Novell deal that seems in retrospect rather
unimportant for many reasons.

Hopefully what I've cut down to is the bare essentials of what's needed to
explain the patent section of GPLv3 to a newbie.  I suspect that I'll want
later to go over this and add more material or reword things further.

I've added a few FIXME-LATER's for that reason.
2014-03-20 20:30:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7940504216 Finish section. 2014-03-20 18:57:14 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a5bf35174c Move one paragraph around, and revise another. 2014-03-20 18:55:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d09f5f3e2a Finish Section 9. 2014-03-20 18:52:01 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c6a0465a65 Termination section rewrite. 2014-03-20 18:50:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4f31de2b98 Comment out this text for now. 2014-03-20 18:28:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
82a504a115 Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs. 2014-03-20 18:28:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5963e0d131 Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later. 2014-03-20 18:26:42 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a03479ec1b Rewrite text on GPLv3§7. 2014-03-20 18:25:39 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
017c6ae1b5 Redraft paragraph. 2014-03-20 18:18:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
751992a932 Rename section 2014-03-20 18:18:37 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a024a36067 I think this text won't be useful. 2014-03-20 18:18:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c4ced9c93f Rewrite paragraph. 2014-03-20 18:16:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
98ae3aaac2 Move this section on License Compatibility here. 2014-03-20 18:16:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
263dd1e086 Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions. 2014-03-20 18:15:11 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2aa2613611 Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions. 2014-03-20 18:10:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
678c1d8099 Finish up Installation Information section. 2014-03-20 18:08:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b00ddaa698 Rewrite material on Installation Information, put it into sections. 2014-03-20 17:59:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3e528a31c Various changes to make all that Magnuson-Moss verbiage useful to the tutorial. 2014-03-20 17:46:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10244bee14 Purely formatting changes. 2014-03-20 17:38:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
aa15f936ce Fontana noted that I edited this poorly the first time,
likely due in my haste to make a funny commit message:

<fontana> bkuhn: I think there's an editing problem in that change
<bkuhn> fontana: I was showing you the commit message more than the content
<bkuhn> are you saying I made an editing erro[r]?
<fontana> yes
2014-03-20 17:36:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b17d0710ac Reword paragraph. 2014-03-20 17:34:09 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cee78c87ef This change does the job that needs to be done to this ¶ for this tutorial. 2014-03-20 17:29:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
579704541d Reword some of this and remove FIXME. 2014-03-20 17:27:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dd9e082222 Rewrote paragraph. 2014-03-20 17:24:41 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4623ebe2ec Reword this paragraph that was just moved here. 2014-03-20 17:24:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8ca2d66685 Move this paragraph to the right place. 2014-03-20 17:23:58 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a83760dcc7 Rewrote this paragraph, removing much which wasn't useful. 2014-03-20 17:19:40 -04:00