Improve the text for Step 2/4.

I'm trying to get a version of this text that is clear.  This is another
attempt.
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Bradley M. Kuhn 2014-02-10 17:41:31 -05:00
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@ -8,14 +8,14 @@ function step2_do () {
$result = "<h2>Step 2/4 - Choose your vote</h2>\n";
$result .= "<p>Clicking on a candidate in the Candidates box adds it in order to the Prefences box.";
$result .= "If you make an incorrect selection, click on the candidate in the Preferences box, and it will move back to the Candidates box. Note: you may need to scroll down to see the Preferences box.</p>";
$result .= "Once you have a Preferences box that you like, use the button at the bottom to continue to the next step. You can review and confirm";
$result .= " your ballot on the next page.</p>";
$result .= "<p>You can vote for as few or as many candidates as you choose. ";
$result .= "An <a href=\"http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Single_transferable_vote\">STV algorithm</a> will be used to count your votes.</p>";
$result .= "<p>Clicking on a candidate in the <em>Candidates</em> box adds it in order to the Prefences box. ";
$result .= "If you want to change a selection you've already made, you can click on the candidate in the <em>Preferences</em> box, and that candidate will move back to the <em>Candidates</em> box. (Note: you may need to scroll down to see the <em>Preferences</em> box).</p>";
$result .= "<p>Once you have a <em>Preferences</em> box that you like, use the button at the bottom to continue to the next step. You can review and confirm";
$result .= " your ballot on the next page.</p>";
$result .= "<p><noscript>Note: This page requires Javascript</noscript></p>";
$result .= "<div class=\"canddata\">\n";