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\label{GPLv2s10}
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					\label{GPLv2s10}
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GPLv2~\S10 reminds the licensee of what is already implied by the nature of
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					GPLv2~\S10 reminds the licensee of what is already implied by the nature of
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copyright law. Namely, the copyright holder of a particular software
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					copyright law.  Namely, the copyright holder of a particular software
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program has the prerogative to grant alternative agreements under separate
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					program has the prerogative to grant alternative agreements under separate
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copyright licenses.
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					copyright licenses.
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					@ -2105,9 +2105,9 @@ preferred way to make something conspicuous, and that has over decades worked
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its way into the voodoo tradition of warranty disclaimer writing.
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					its way into the voodoo tradition of warranty disclaimer writing.
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Some have argued the GPL is unenforceable in some jurisdictions because
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					Some have argued the GPL is unenforceable in some jurisdictions because
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its disclaimer of warranties is impermissibly broad. However, GPLv2~\S11
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					its disclaimer of warranties is impermissibly broad.  However, GPLv2~\S11
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contains a jurisdictional savings provision, which states that it is to be
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					contains a jurisdictional savings provision, which states that it is to be
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interpreted only as broadly as allowed by applicable law. Such a
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					interpreted only as broadly as allowed by applicable law.  Such a
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provision ensures that both it, and the entire GPL, is enforceable in any
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					provision ensures that both it, and the entire GPL, is enforceable in any
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jurisdiction, regardless of any particular law regarding the
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					jurisdiction, regardless of any particular law regarding the
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permissibility of certain warranty disclaimers.
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					permissibility of certain warranty disclaimers.
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\label{GPLv2s12}
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					\label{GPLv2s12}
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There are many types of warranties, and in some jurisdictions some of them
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					There are many types of warranties, and in some jurisdictions some of them
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cannot be disclaimed. Therefore, usually agreements will have both a
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					cannot be disclaimed.  Therefore, usually agreements will have both a
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warranty disclaimer and a limitation of liability, as we have in GPLv2~\S12. \S
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					warranty disclaimer and a limitation of liability, as we have in GPLv2~\S12.
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11 thus gets rid of all implied warranties that can legally be
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					GPLv2~\S11 thus gets rid of all implied warranties that can legally be
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disavowed. GPLv2~\S12, in turn, limits the liability of the actor for any
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					disavowed. GPLv2~\S12, in turn, limits the liability of the actor for any
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warranties that cannot legally be disclaimed in a particular jurisdiction.
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					warranties that cannot legally be disclaimed in a particular jurisdiction.
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					@ -2129,7 +2129,7 @@ Again, some have argued the GPL is unenforceable in some jurisdictions
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because its limitation of liability is impermissibly broad. However, \S
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					because its limitation of liability is impermissibly broad. However, \S
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12, just like its sister, GPLv2~\S11, contains a jurisdictional savings
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					12, just like its sister, GPLv2~\S11, contains a jurisdictional savings
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provision, which states that it is to be interpreted only as broadly as
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					provision, which states that it is to be interpreted only as broadly as
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allowed by applicable law. As stated above, such a provision ensures that
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					allowed by applicable law.  As stated above, such a provision ensures that
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both GPLv2~\S12, and the entire GPL, is enforceable in any jurisdiction,
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					both GPLv2~\S12, and the entire GPL, is enforceable in any jurisdiction,
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regardless of any particular law regarding the permissibility of limiting
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					regardless of any particular law regarding the permissibility of limiting
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liability.
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					liability.
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