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not believe that software comes with any warranty. Notwithstanding the not believe that software comes with any warranty. Notwithstanding the
\href{http://mlis.state.md.us/2000rs/billfile/hb0019.htm}{Maryland's} and \href{http://leg1.state.va.us/cgi-bin/legp504.exe?001+ful+SB372ER}{Virginia's} UCITA bills, there are few or no implied warranties with software. \href{http://mlis.state.md.us/2000rs/billfile/hb0019.htm}{Maryland's} and \href{http://leg1.state.va.us/cgi-bin/legp504.exe?001+ful+SB372ER}{Virginia's} UCITA bills, there are few or no implied warranties with software.
However, just to be on the safe side, GPL clearly disclaims them, and the However, just to be on the safe side, GPL clearly disclaims them, and the
GPL requires re distributors to keep the disclaimer very visible. (See GPL requires re-distributors to keep the disclaimer very visible. (See
Sections~\ref{GPLv2s11} and~\ref{GPLv2s12} of this tutorial for more on GPL's Sections~\ref{GPLv2s11} and~\ref{GPLv2s12} of this tutorial for more on GPL's
warranty disclaimers.) warranty disclaimers.)
Note finally that GPLv2~\S1 creates groundwork for the important defense of Note finally that GPLv2~\S1 creates groundwork for the important defense of
commercial freedom. GPLv2~\S1 clearly states that in the case of verbatim commercial freedom. GPLv2~\S1 clearly states that in the case of verbatim
copies, one may make money. Re distributors are fully permitted to charge copies, one may make money. Re-distributors are fully permitted to charge
for the redistribution of copies of Free Software. In addition, they may for the re-distribution of copies of Free Software. In addition, they may
provide the warranty protection that the GPL disclaims as an additional provide the warranty protection that the GPL disclaims as an additional
service for a fee. (See Section~\ref{Business Models} for more discussion service for a fee. (See Section~\ref{Business Models} for more discussion
on making a profit from Free Software redistribution.) on making a profit from Free Software redistribution.)
@ -1118,7 +1118,7 @@ on making a profit from Free Software redistribution.)
We digress for this chapter from our discussion of GPL's exact text to We digress for this chapter from our discussion of GPL's exact text to
consider the matter of derivative works --- a concept that we must consider the matter of derivative works --- a concept that we must
understand fully before considering GPLv2~\S\S2--3\@. GPL, and Free understand fully before considering GPLv2~\S\S2--3\@. The GPL, and Free
Software licensing in general, relies critically on the concept of Software licensing in general, relies critically on the concept of
``derivative work'' since software that is ``independent,'' (i.e., not ``derivative work'' since software that is ``independent,'' (i.e., not
``derivative'') of Free Software need not abide by the terms of the ``derivative'') of Free Software need not abide by the terms of the