Wordsmith sentence after phrase "such software".
I think Fontana's change a few commits back which s/it/such software/ in this sentence is a useful one. However, the entire sentence reads even worse because "such software Free Software" looks so strange as a string of words in the middle of the sentence. This change is the best rework I could find that resolved the problem. It's probably not the best option but is certainly an improvement.
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		|  | @ -178,8 +178,9 @@ Section~\ref{Proprietary Relicensing} talks in detail about how | |||
| this can unfortunately happen even if a program is released under the GPL\@. | ||||
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| Many people refer to software with these freedoms as ``Open Source.'' | ||||
| Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software Free | ||||
| Software,\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software | ||||
| Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software | ||||
| by the name ``Free | ||||
| Software'',\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software | ||||
|   Movement and the Open Source Movement are documented on FSF's Web site at | ||||
|   \url{http://www.fsf.org/licensing/essays/free-software-for-freedom.html}.}, | ||||
|  those who call the software ``Open Source'' are often focused on a side | ||||
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