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Wordsmith sentence after phrase "such software".

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I think Fontana's change a few commits back which s/it/such software/ in
this sentence is a useful one.  However, the entire sentence reads even
worse because "such software Free Software" looks so strange as a string
of words in the middle of the sentence.

This change is the best rework I could find that resolved the problem.
It's probably not the best option but is certainly an improvement.
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@ -178,8 +178,9 @@ Section~\ref{Proprietary Relicensing} talks in detail about how
this can unfortunately happen even if a program is released under the GPL\@. this can unfortunately happen even if a program is released under the GPL\@.
Many people refer to software with these freedoms as ``Open Source.'' Many people refer to software with these freedoms as ``Open Source.''
Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software Free Besides having a different political focus from those who call such software
Software,\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software by the name ``Free
Software'',\footnote{The political differences between the Free Software
Movement and the Open Source Movement are documented on FSF's Web site at Movement and the Open Source Movement are documented on FSF's Web site at
\url{http://www.fsf.org/licensing/essays/free-software-for-freedom.html}.}, \url{http://www.fsf.org/licensing/essays/free-software-for-freedom.html}.},
those who call the software ``Open Source'' are often focused on a side those who call the software ``Open Source'' are often focused on a side