donaldr3
7ce3980bd6
multiple copy edits
2014-03-21 16:10:21 -04:00
donaldr3
3e526a2589
multiple copy edits
2014-03-21 16:05:43 -04:00
donaldr3
a7f901e4a3
other/otherwise
2014-03-21 16:04:18 -04:00
donaldr3
0b2aa866a7
remove extra 'the'
2014-03-21 16:02:59 -04:00
donaldr3
04bc20eba7
removed extra 'can'
2014-03-21 16:01:39 -04:00
donaldr3
e1ef7578f7
a/an
2014-03-21 16:01:16 -04:00
donaldr3
ec363feb97
removed extraneous clause
2014-03-21 16:00:52 -04:00
donaldr3
8310c8947a
removed extra sentence
2014-03-21 16:00:19 -04:00
donaldr3
f7ff1ac0d5
removed extra word 'which'
2014-03-21 15:59:41 -04:00
donaldr3
d55d2787c8
removed 'that'
2014-03-21 15:56:37 -04:00
donaldr3
e92e89ae55
chose/choose
2014-03-21 15:33:08 -04:00
donaldr3
f0efbf5fa8
chose/choose
2014-03-21 15:32:40 -04:00
donaldr3
592a6f08de
the are ultimate/ there are ultimately
2014-03-21 15:31:49 -04:00
donaldr3
531f142207
the gpl
2014-03-21 15:14:35 -04:00
donaldr3
c007884497
the gpl
2014-03-21 15:12:38 -04:00
donaldr3
4098beb707
an/a
2014-03-21 15:11:09 -04:00
donaldr3
83b69e1f5c
added missing for
2014-03-21 15:10:05 -04:00
donaldr3
0e5e24093f
the gpl
2014-03-21 15:07:37 -04:00
donaldr3
2880f4eebb
control to controls
2014-03-21 14:56:43 -04:00
donaldr3
9bbbda9847
mechanism to mechanisms
2014-03-21 14:39:37 -04:00
donaldr3
2774ae23d2
removed extraneous 'of'
2014-03-21 14:17:10 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
1c10eb02eb
Change paragraph to refer to next parts.
2014-03-21 12:55:10 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f34606819a
Various formatting fixes.
2014-03-21 12:55:08 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
58f65dff21
These should all be subsection.
2014-03-21 12:55:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8486e56cab
Various temp changes to handle printing it this weekend.
2014-03-21 12:55:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f9bea67be7
Wordsmith paragraph and add label it now references.
2014-03-21 12:54:32 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6cbb2d530d
Wordsmith paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:54:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
31118ec3c1
Removed some specific company names from here, particularly because the
...
information is somewhat out of date.
2014-03-21 12:54:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
be829a5f2a
m-dash
2014-03-21 12:54:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4e4919167e
Proprietary relicensing comment.
2014-03-21 12:54:18 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ab4861b27e
Spell check.
2014-03-21 12:54:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
730a079cc7
Comment out these sections.
2014-03-21 12:54:15 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
56382c650a
Fix to what really happened.
2014-03-21 12:54:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3224b6aef3
GPLv3§14.
2014-03-21 12:54:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0c96a3bb7d
Affero GPL section, not doing this justice now, but this is good enough to
...
print for Monday's class.
2014-03-21 12:54:05 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8bd2bbc58d
Wrote and merged text for GPLv3§12
2014-03-21 12:53:56 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6f718b34bb
Correct ' signs in these places.
2014-03-21 12:53:55 -04:00
Tony Sebro
a394bce20f
Made final edits to Implied Patent License section
2014-03-21 12:53:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
859cfccca7
Resolve all undefined reference.
2014-03-21 12:53:51 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
296b733311
Do not really need a section break here.
2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
71b8aa67c9
I still love to write texit.
2014-03-21 12:53:50 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
539cc5e81b
Rewrite the entire Patent section.
...
Much of this text, pasted from various different rationale documents, deals
with issues that either changed in later drafts, or is focused on various
minutia about the Microsoft/Novell deal that seems in retrospect rather
unimportant for many reasons.
Hopefully what I've cut down to is the bare essentials of what's needed to
explain the patent section of GPLv3 to a newbie. I suspect that I'll want
later to go over this and add more material or reword things further.
I've added a few FIXME-LATER's for that reason.
2014-03-21 12:53:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cea2bde2d5
Finish section.
2014-03-21 12:53:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9683b6ed0f
Move one paragraph around, and revise another.
2014-03-21 12:53:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8e06bdea08
Finish Section 9.
2014-03-21 12:53:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3ec650424
Termination section rewrite.
2014-03-21 12:53:38 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d7bff4baa5
Comment out this text for now.
2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
96735e78d0
Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs.
2014-03-21 12:53:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
bb29c91417
Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later.
2014-03-21 12:53:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dc7f0fea56
Rewrite text on GPLv3§7.
2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cfde3638b1
Redraft paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:53:26 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
168594f3c2
Rename section
2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7584fb1122
I think this text won't be useful.
2014-03-21 12:53:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8cd5c5e373
Rewrite paragraph.
2014-03-21 12:53:22 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
06178c3fb2
Move this section on License Compatibility here.
2014-03-21 12:53:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
110f9ece93
Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions.
2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c28313b014
Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions.
2014-03-21 12:53:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
27ec9cecb9
Finish up Installation Information section.
2014-03-21 12:53:19 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3b878270e4
Change paragraph to refer to next parts.
2014-03-20 22:10:38 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d0821c856b
Various formatting fixes.
2014-03-20 22:09:36 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
e2e1335aea
These should all be subsection.
2014-03-20 22:05:28 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
05d02bfff4
Various temp changes to handle printing it this weekend.
2014-03-20 22:01:07 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8c5f9f38d1
Wordsmith paragraph and add label it now references.
2014-03-20 21:21:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
595c64c158
Wordsmith paragraph.
2014-03-20 21:14:20 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a7ffbb9ee5
Removed some specific company names from here, particularly because the
...
information is somewhat out of date.
2014-03-20 21:00:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
8e5a381028
m-dash
2014-03-20 20:57:13 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0117799b69
Proprietary relicensing comment.
2014-03-20 20:57:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
16917f85a2
Spell check.
2014-03-20 20:56:36 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
ceccb45e25
Comment out these sections.
2014-03-20 20:49:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b494e0cc66
Fix to what really happened.
2014-03-20 20:49:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
596878284d
GPLv3§14.
2014-03-20 20:48:15 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f8a9199284
Affero GPL section, not doing this justice now, but this is good enough to
...
print for Monday's class.
2014-03-20 20:46:27 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
3878521bbf
Wrote and merged text for GPLv3§12
2014-03-20 20:39:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
f491e35882
Correct ' signs in these places.
2014-03-20 20:36:14 -04:00
Tony Sebro
b5b0571a6a
Made final edits to Implied Patent License section
2014-03-20 20:35:23 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
9dc94d5869
Resolve all undefined reference.
2014-03-20 20:34:02 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4f266baa97
Do not really need a section break here.
2014-03-20 20:31:24 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
0ffabed0e0
I still love to write texit.
2014-03-20 20:30:49 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5c1a943df9
Rewrite the entire Patent section.
...
Much of this text, pasted from various different rationale documents, deals
with issues that either changed in later drafts, or is focused on various
minutia about the Microsoft/Novell deal that seems in retrospect rather
unimportant for many reasons.
Hopefully what I've cut down to is the bare essentials of what's needed to
explain the patent section of GPLv3 to a newbie. I suspect that I'll want
later to go over this and add more material or reword things further.
I've added a few FIXME-LATER's for that reason.
2014-03-20 20:30:06 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7940504216
Finish section.
2014-03-20 18:57:14 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a5bf35174c
Move one paragraph around, and revise another.
2014-03-20 18:55:29 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
d09f5f3e2a
Finish Section 9.
2014-03-20 18:52:01 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c6a0465a65
Termination section rewrite.
2014-03-20 18:50:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
4f31de2b98
Comment out this text for now.
2014-03-20 18:28:55 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
82a504a115
Consolidate and remove unneeded FIXMEs.
2014-03-20 18:28:44 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5963e0d131
Comment out this text, will need to be adapted later.
2014-03-20 18:26:42 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a03479ec1b
Rewrite text on GPLv3§7.
2014-03-20 18:25:39 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
017c6ae1b5
Redraft paragraph.
2014-03-20 18:18:45 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
751992a932
Rename section
2014-03-20 18:18:37 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
a024a36067
I think this text won't be useful.
2014-03-20 18:18:30 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c4ced9c93f
Rewrite paragraph.
2014-03-20 18:16:53 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
98ae3aaac2
Move this section on License Compatibility here.
2014-03-20 18:16:04 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
263dd1e086
Rewrote paragraphs on additional permissions.
2014-03-20 18:15:11 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
2aa2613611
Rework and rewrite paragraph on additional permissions.
2014-03-20 18:10:21 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
678c1d8099
Finish up Installation Information section.
2014-03-20 18:08:16 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b00ddaa698
Rewrite material on Installation Information, put it into sections.
2014-03-20 17:59:48 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b3e528a31c
Various changes to make all that Magnuson-Moss verbiage useful to the tutorial.
2014-03-20 17:46:00 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
10244bee14
Purely formatting changes.
2014-03-20 17:38:34 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
aa15f936ce
Fontana noted that I edited this poorly the first time,
...
likely due in my haste to make a funny commit message:
<fontana> bkuhn: I think there's an editing problem in that change
<bkuhn> fontana: I was showing you the commit message more than the content
<bkuhn> are you saying I made an editing erro[r]?
<fontana> yes
2014-03-20 17:36:31 -04:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
b17d0710ac
Reword paragraph.
2014-03-20 17:34:09 -04:00