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\subsection{The Freedom to Share Improvements}
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					\subsection{The Freedom to Share Improvements}
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The freedom to modify and improve is somewhat empty without the freedom to
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					The freedom to modify and improve is somewhat empty without the freedom to
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share those improvements. The Free Software community is built on the
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					share those improvements.  The Software freedom community is built on the
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pillar of altruistic sharing of improved Free Software. Inevitably, a
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					pillar of altruistic sharing of improved Free Software. Inevitably, a
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Free Software project sprouts a mailing list where improvements are shared
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					Free Software project sprouts a mailing list where improvements are shared
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freely among members of the development community. Such noncommercial
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					freely among members of the development community.  Such noncommercial
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sharing must be permitted for Free Software to thrive.
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					sharing is the primary reason that Free Software thrives.
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Commercial sharing of modified Free Software is equally important.
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					Commercial sharing of modified Free Software is equally important.
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For commercial support to exist in a competitive free market, all
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					For commercial support to exist in a competitive free market, all
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developers --- from single-person contractors to large software
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					developers -- from single-person contractors to large software
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companies --- must have the freedom to market their services as
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					companies -- must have the freedom to market their services as
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improvers of Free Software. All forms of such service marketing must
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					improvers of Free Software.  All forms of such service marketing must
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be equally available to all.
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					be equally available to all.
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For example, selling support services for Free Software is fully
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					For example, selling support services for Free Software is fully
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permitted. Companies and individuals can offer themselves as ``the place
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					permitted. Companies and individuals can offer themselves as ``the place
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to call'' when software fails or does not function properly. For such a
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					to call'' when software fails or does not function properly.  For such a
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service to be meaningful, the entity offering that service must have the
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					service to be meaningful, the entity offering that service needs the
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right to modify and improve the software for the customer to correct any
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					right to modify and improve the software for the customer to correct any
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problems that are beyond mere user error.
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					problems that are beyond mere user error.
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Entities must also be permitted to make available modified versions of
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					Software freedom licenses also permit any entity to distribute modified
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Free Software. Most Free Software programs have a ``standard version''
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					versions of Free Software.  Most Free Software programs have a ``standard
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that is made available from the primary developers of the software.
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					version'' that is made available from the primary developers of the software.
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However, all who have the software have the ``freedom to fork'' --- that
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					However, all who have the software have the ``freedom to fork'' -- that is,
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is, make available nontrivial modified versions of the software on a
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					make available nontrivial modified versions of the software on a permanent or
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permanent or semi-permanent basis. Such freedom is central to vibrant
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					semi-permanent basis.  Such freedom is central to vibrant developer and user
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developer and user interaction.
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					interaction.
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Companies and individuals have the right to make true value-added versions
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					Companies and individuals have the right to make true value-added versions
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of Free Software. They may use freedom to share improvements to
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					of Free Software.  They may use freedom to share improvements to
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distribute distinct versions of Free Software with different functionality
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					distribute distinct versions of Free Software with different functionality
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and features. Furthermore, this freedom can be exercised to serve a
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					and features.  Furthermore, this freedom can be exercised to serve a
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disenfranchised subset of the user community. If the developers of the
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					disenfranchised subset of the user community.  If the developers of the
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standard version refuse to serve the needs of some of the software's
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					standard version refuse to serve the needs of some of the software's
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users, other entities have the right to create a long- or short-lived fork
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					users, other entities have the right to create a long- or short-lived fork
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to serve that sub-community.
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					to serve that sub-community.
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