Wordsmith and typo fixes.

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Bradley M. Kuhn 2014-03-18 18:33:18 -04:00
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@ -1967,10 +1967,10 @@ formal agreement between the licensee and the software distributor to be
valid. This has led to mechanisms like ``shrink-wrap'' and ``click-wrap'' valid. This has led to mechanisms like ``shrink-wrap'' and ``click-wrap''
as mechanisms to perform acceptance ceremonies with EULAs. as mechanisms to perform acceptance ceremonies with EULAs.
The GPL does not need contract law to ``transfer rights.'' No rights The GPL does not need contract law to ``transfer rights.'' Usually, no rights
are transfered between parties. By contrast, the GPL is a permission are transfered between parties. By contrast, the GPL is primarily a permission
slip to undertake activities that would otherwise have been prohibited slip to undertake activities that would otherwise have been prohibited
by copyright law. As such, it needs no acceptance ceremony; the by copyright law. As such, GPL needs no acceptance ceremony; the
licensee is not even required to accept the license. licensee is not even required to accept the license.
However, without the GPL, the activities of copying, modifying and However, without the GPL, the activities of copying, modifying and