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software licensing fees is negligible. The real profit is in the hardware,
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but it is essential that software be stable, reliable and dependable, and
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the users be allowed to have unfettered access to it. Free Software, and
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GPL'd software in particular (because IBM can be assured that proprietary
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versions of the same software will not exist to compete on their hardware)
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is the right choice.
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GPL’d software in particular, is the right choice. For instance IBM can be
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assured that proprietary versions of the their software will not exist to
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compete on their hardware.
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For example, charging a ``convenience fee'' for Free Software,
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when set at a reasonable price (around \$60 or so), can produce some
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