move long parenthetical text out of short sentence

it's easier to read this way.
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Andrew Engelbrecht 2014-12-08 23:31:30 -05:00 committed by Bradley M. Kuhn
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@ -4857,9 +4857,10 @@ found that for higher-end hardware, the profit made from proprietary
software licensing fees is negligible. The real profit is in the hardware, software licensing fees is negligible. The real profit is in the hardware,
but it is essential that software be stable, reliable and dependable, and but it is essential that software be stable, reliable and dependable, and
the users be allowed to have unfettered access to it. Free Software, and the users be allowed to have unfettered access to it. Free Software, and
GPL'd software in particular (because IBM can be assured that proprietary GPLd software in particular, is the right choice. For instance IBM can be
versions of the same software will not exist to compete on their hardware) assured that proprietary versions of the their software will not exist to
is the right choice. compete on their hardware.
For example, charging a ``convenience fee'' for Free Software, For example, charging a ``convenience fee'' for Free Software,
when set at a reasonable price (around \$60 or so), can produce some when set at a reasonable price (around \$60 or so), can produce some