From b9f7a402a6a739fc7f0b8ca5022764cda5c4eff9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Bradley M. Kuhn" <bkuhn@ebb.org>
Date: Wed, 19 Nov 2014 12:53:29 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Rewrite paragraph for readability.

---
 compliance-guide.tex | 13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/compliance-guide.tex b/compliance-guide.tex
index a853161..b057014 100644
--- a/compliance-guide.tex
+++ b/compliance-guide.tex
@@ -1430,13 +1430,14 @@ the inquiry served other consulting purposes later.
 
 Feelings and opinions about this behavior are mixed within the larger
 copyleft community.  Some see it as a reasonable business model and others
-renounce it as corrupt behavior.  However, from the point of view of a GPL
-violator, the most important issue is to determine the motivations of the
-enforcer.  The COGEOs such as the FSF and Conservancy have made substantial
+renounce it as corrupt behavior.  Regardless, a GPL
+violator should always immediately determine the motivations of the
+enforcer via documented, verifiable facts.  For example, COGEOs such as the FSF and Conservancy have made substantial
 public commitments to enforce in a way that is uniform, transparent, and
-publicly documented.  Since these organizations are public charities, they
-are accountable to the IRS and the public at large in their annual Form 990
-filings, and everyone can examine their revenue models and scrutinize their
+publicly documented.  Furthermore, since these specific organizations are
+public charities in the USA, they
+are accountable to the IRS (and the public at large) in their annual Form 990
+filings.   Everyone may examine their revenue models and scrutinize their
 work.
 
 However, entities and individuals who do GPL enforcement centered primarily