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@ -162,23 +162,32 @@ situations admittedly do require a highly
fact-dependent analysis and cannot be addressed in a general-purpose fact-dependent analysis and cannot be addressed in a general-purpose
document, anyway. document, anyway.
Most companies accused of violations, however, lack a basic understanding \medskip
of how to comply even in the straightforward scenario. This document
provides that fundamental and generally applicable prerequisite knowledge. Most companies accused of violations lack a basic understanding
of how to comply even in the former straightforward scenario. This document
provides those companies with the fundamental and generally applicable prerequisite knowledge.
For answers to rarer and more complicated legal questions, such as whether For answers to rarer and more complicated legal questions, such as whether
your software is a derivative work of some copylefted software, consult your software is a derivative or combined work of some copylefted software, consult
with an attorney.\footnote{If you would like more information on the with an attorney.\footnote{If you would like more information on the
application of derivative works doctrine to software, a detailed legal application of derivative works doctrine to software, a detailed legal
discussion is presented in our colleague Dan Ravicher's article, discussion is presented in our colleague Dan Ravicher's article,
\textit{Software Derivative Work: A Circuit Dependent Determination}.} \textit{Software Derivative Work: A Circuit Dependent Determination} and in
\tutorialpartsplit{\texit{Detailed Analysis of the GNU GPL and Related
Licenses}'s Section on derivative works}{\S~\ref{derivative-works} of
this tutorial}.}
For this discussion, we will assume that you have already identified the This discussion thus assumes that you have already identified the
``work'' covered by the license, and that any components not under the GPL ``work'' covered by the license, and that any components not under the GPL
(e.g., applications written entirely by your developers that merely happen (e.g., applications written entirely by your developers that merely happen
to run on a Linux-based operating system) distributed in conjunction with to run on a Linux-based operating system) distributed in conjunction with
those works are separate works within the meaning of copyright law. In those works are separate works within the meaning of copyright law and the GPL\@. In
such a case, the GPL requires you to provide complete and corresponding such a case, the GPL requires you to provide complete corresponding
source for the GPL'd components and your modifications thereto, but not source (CCS)\footnote{For more on CCS, see
\tutorialpartsplit{\texit{Detailed Analysis of the GNU GPL and Related
Licenses}'s Section on GPLv2~\S2 and GPLv3~\S1.}{\S~\ref{GPLv2s2} and \S~\ref{GPLv3s1} of
this tutorial}.
for the GPL'd components and your modifications thereto, but not
for independent proprietary applications. The procedures described in for independent proprietary applications. The procedures described in
this document address this typical scenario. this document address this typical scenario.

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used. used.
\section{GPLv3~\S1: Understanding CCS} \section{GPLv3~\S1: Understanding CCS}
\label{GPLv3s1}
Ensuring that users have the source code to the software they receive and the Ensuring that users have the source code to the software they receive and the
freedom to modify remains the paramount right embodied in the Free Software freedom to modify remains the paramount right embodied in the Free Software