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@@ -160,9 +160,9 @@ user has the following freedoms:
 \end{itemize}
 
 The focus on ``a particular user'' is particularly pertinent here.  It is not
-uncommon for the same version of a specific program to grant these freedoms
-to some subset of its user base, while others have none or only some of these
-freedoms.  Section~\ref{Proprietary Relicensing} talks in detail about how
+uncommon for a subset of a specific program's user base to have these freedoms, while other
+users of the same version the program have none or only some of these freedoms.
+Section~\ref{Proprietary Relicensing} talks in detail about how
 this can unfortunately happen even if a program is released under the GPL\@.
 
 Many people refer to software that gives these freedoms as ``Open Source.''