Fix a couple typos in case study intro paragraph

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Denver Gingerich 2014-11-07 10:50:14 -05:00
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@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ However, in the experience of the two primary community-oriented enforcers,
Conservancy and the FSF, such CCS results routinely fix the description of Conservancy and the FSF, such CCS results routinely fix the description of
``barely complies with GPL's requirements''. To use an academic analogy: ``barely complies with GPL's requirements''. To use an academic analogy:
while a ``C'' is certainly a passing grade, any instructor prefers to while a ``C'' is certainly a passing grade, any instructor prefers to
disseminate to the class a exemplar sample that earned an ``A''. disseminate to the class an exemplar sample that earned an ``A''.
Fortunately, thanks in large part to the FSF's Fortunately, thanks in large part to the FSF's
``Respects Your Freedom'' (RYF) certification campaign\footnote{\href{RYF is ``Respects Your Freedom'' (RYF) certification campaign\footnote{\href{RYF is
@ -285,7 +285,7 @@ Specifically, this chapter discusses the purchase, CCS provision, and a
step-by-step build and installation analysis of a specific, physical, step-by-step build and installation analysis of a specific, physical,
embedded electronics product. The product in question is embedded electronics product. The product in question is
\href{https://www.thinkpenguin.com/gnu-linux/free-software-wireless-n-broadband-router-gnu-linux-tpe-nwifirouter}{the \href{https://www.thinkpenguin.com/gnu-linux/free-software-wireless-n-broadband-router-gnu-linux-tpe-nwifirouter}{the
``TPE-NWIFIROUTER'' wireless router by ThinkPenguin}\footnote{The FSF of ``TPE-NWIFIROUTER'' wireless router by ThinkPenguin}.\footnote{The FSF of
course performed a thorough CCS check as part of the certification process. course performed a thorough CCS check as part of the certification process.
The analysis discussed herein was independently performed by Software The analysis discussed herein was independently performed by Software
Freedom Conservancy without reviewing any findings of the FSF, and thus the Freedom Conservancy without reviewing any findings of the FSF, and thus the