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@@ -1421,13 +1421,12 @@ to ``fix them'' for companies.  Other such operators hold copyrights in some
 key piece of copylefted software and enforce as a mechanism to find out who
 is most likely to fund improvements on the software.
 
-A few stories abound in the GPL enforcement community that companies have
-often formed beneficial consulting or employment relationships with
-developers they first encountered through enforcement.  In some cases,
-working together to alter the mode of use of the project's code in the
-company's products was an explicit element in dispute resolution.  More
-often, the communication channels opened in the course of the inquiry served
-other and more fruitful purposes later.
+A few companies report that they have formed beneficial consulting or
+employment relationships with developers they first encountered through
+enforcement.  In some such cases, companies have worked with such consultants
+to alter the mode of use of the project's code in the company's products.
+More often in these cases, the communication channels opened in the course of
+the inquiry served other consulting purposes later.
 
 Feelings and opinions about this behavior are mixed within the larger
 copyleft community.  Some see it as a reasonable business model and others