diff --git a/gpl-lgpl.tex b/gpl-lgpl.tex
index 0e480b7..1e6e136 100644
--- a/gpl-lgpl.tex
+++ b/gpl-lgpl.tex
@@ -1053,11 +1053,11 @@ is allowed.
 
 Preservation of copyright notice and license notifications are mentioned
 specifically in GPLv2~\S1.  These are in some ways the most important part of
-the redistribution, which is why they are mentioned by name. The GPL
+the redistribution, which is why they are mentioned by name.  GPL
 always strives to make it abundantly clear to anyone who receives the
-software what its license is. The goal is to make sure users know their
-rights and freedoms under GPL, and to leave no reason that someone would be
-surprised the software she got was licensed under GPL\@. Thus
+software what its license is.  The goal is to make sure users know their
+rights and freedoms under GPL, and to leave no reason that users might be
+surprised the software is GPL'd. Thus
 throughout the GPL, there are specific references to the importance of
 notifying others down the distribution chain that they have rights under
 GPL.