Rewrite paragraph to refer to FSF in third person and change tense,

and also wordsmith it a bit.
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Bradley M. Kuhn 2014-03-19 09:52:54 -04:00
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@ -2183,10 +2183,12 @@ GPLv3 that's possible is by default less than a decade.
These two factors usually cause even new students of GPL to start with GPLv2 These two factors usually cause even new students of GPL to start with GPLv2
and move on to GPLv3, and this tutorial follows that pattern. and move on to GPLv3, and this tutorial follows that pattern.
We recognize that, overall, the changes made in GPLv3 have increased the Overall, the changes made in GPLv3 admittedly \textit{increased} the
complexity of the license. We would have liked to oblige those who have asked complexity of the license. The FSF stated at the start of the GPLv3 process
us for a simpler and shorter GPL, but we had to give priority to making GPLv3 that they would have liked to oblige those who have asked for a simpler and
do the job that needs to be done. shorter GPL\@. Ultimately, the FSF gave priority to making GPLv3 do the job
that needs to be done to build a better copyleft. Obsession for concision
should never trump software freedom.
\section{GPLv3~\S0: Giving In On ``Defined Terms''} \section{GPLv3~\S0: Giving In On ``Defined Terms''}