Rewrite this paragraph to fit the tutorial.

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Bradley M. Kuhn 2014-03-20 12:35:55 -04:00
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@ -2722,15 +2722,12 @@ suggesting ``distribution in a physical medium only''.
To address these two issues, GPLv3 says ``price'' in place of ``fee,'' and To address these two issues, GPLv3 says ``price'' in place of ``fee,'' and
removes the term ``physical.'' removes the term ``physical.''
GPLv3~\S4 has also been revised from its corresponding section in GPLv2 in
%FIXME: what section does this belong in? light of the GPLv3~\S7 (see \S~\ref{GPLv3s7} in this tutorial for more).
Specifically, a distributor of verbatim copies of the program's source code
Section 4 has been revised from its corresponding section in GPLv2 in light must obey any existing additional terms that apply to parts of the program
of the new section 7 on license compatibility. A distributor of verbatim pursuant to GPLv3~\S7. In addition, the distributor is required to keep
copies of the program's source code must obey any existing additional terms intact all license notices, including notices of such additional terms.
that apply to parts of the program. In addition, the distributor is required
to keep intact all license notices, including notices of such additional
terms.
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