diff --git a/gpl-lgpl.tex b/gpl-lgpl.tex
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--- a/gpl-lgpl.tex
+++ b/gpl-lgpl.tex
@@ -2310,8 +2310,8 @@ rights\footnote{While nearly all attorneys and copyleft theorists are in
   holders typically formally restore distributions rights once the only
   remaining compliance issue is ``you lost copyright permission due to
   GPLv2~\S4''.  Therefore, the heated debates, which have raged between
-  Jaeger and nearly everyone else in the copyleft community for nearly a
-  decade, are mostly about a nearly moot and esoteric legal detail.}.
+  Jaeger and almost everyone else in the copyleft community for nearly a
+  decade, regard an almost moot and wholly esoteric legal detail.}.
 
 \section{GPLv2~\S7: ``Give Software Liberty or Give It Death!''}
 \label{GPLv2s7}