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Tony Sebro
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fixed another HTML typo
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Tony Sebro
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90e47ca68b
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fixed HTML typos, added Oxford commas as needed, tightened up grammar
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edits to Bradley's revisions, adding Jeremy's comments
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Bradley M. Kuhn
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Some wording improvements.
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Bradley M. Kuhn
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fdff9bd4c2
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I think these are supposed to be mdash'es.
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Bradley M. Kuhn
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Change emphasis.
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Bradley M. Kuhn
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7e357a316f
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Add a few more items to Karen's bullet list here.
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Bradley M. Kuhn
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5fd1e37321
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Summary paragraph about dire situation at top.
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Bradley M. Kuhn
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cea2f76a92
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Fill paragraphs, no substantive change.
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Bradley M. Kuhn
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dfa8b2db02
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Fix bad HTML tag.
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with Jeremy's suggestions.
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draft as sent to budget/finance committee
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Bradley M. Kuhn
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Fork from original-supporter-appeal.html.
This new appeal file will be a rewrite of the original supporter appeal.
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