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8c41acda69 small edits 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Tony Sebro
fde9c3d12c fixed another HTML typo 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Tony Sebro
90e47ca68b fixed HTML typos, added Oxford commas as needed, tightened up grammar 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
fc699fef07 edits to Bradley's revisions, adding Jeremy's comments 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6f5f5c8949 Some wording improvements. 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
fdff9bd4c2 I think these are supposed to be mdash'es. 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
39a7c1efb4 Change emphasis. 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7e357a316f Add a few more items to Karen's bullet list here. 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5fd1e37321 Summary paragraph about dire situation at top. 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cea2f76a92 Fill paragraphs, no substantive change. 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dfa8b2db02 Fix bad HTML tag. 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
0baa06870f with Jeremy's suggestions. 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
bb409cc571 draft as sent to budget/finance committee 2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
29b997a50e Fork from original-supporter-appeal.html.
This new appeal file will be a rewrite of the original supporter appeal.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00