Bradley M. Kuhn
3612338787
Soften language on monthly supporter benefit issue
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Monthly supporters actually do currently receive their t-shirt when
they've given at least $60. They also are listed immediately.
In an effort to make monthly Supporters feel a bit better about the
delay, this text is improved to explain the situation a bit better.
2015-11-30 19:19:45 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
96fa4951fa
Attempt to be a bit clearer about monthly.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
c5a5b17d7b
Various improvements and changes.
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* Correct URLs not to include Conservancy's own site.
* Various wording changes.
* Some HTML formatting fixes.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5e2d159ea1
Add blank line.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
25fe9d6f8b
Properly insert images.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
c686216e5e
took out brackets around numbers
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
0b07de4c01
add location of staff pic in repo to be uploaded
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
ce3bd84d3c
with cwebber suggestion to edit first para and references to graphics
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
8c41acda69
small edits
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Tony Sebro
fde9c3d12c
fixed another HTML typo
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Tony Sebro
90e47ca68b
fixed HTML typos, added Oxford commas as needed, tightened up grammar
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
fc699fef07
edits to Bradley's revisions, adding Jeremy's comments
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
6f5f5c8949
Some wording improvements.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
fdff9bd4c2
I think these are supposed to be mdash'es.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
39a7c1efb4
Change emphasis.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
7e357a316f
Add a few more items to Karen's bullet list here.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
5fd1e37321
Summary paragraph about dire situation at top.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
cea2f76a92
Fill paragraphs, no substantive change.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
dfa8b2db02
Fix bad HTML tag.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
0baa06870f
with Jeremy's suggestions.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
bb409cc571
draft as sent to budget/finance committee
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
Bradley M. Kuhn
29b997a50e
Fork from original-supporter-appeal.html.
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This new appeal file will be a rewrite of the original supporter appeal.
2015-11-30 19:19:44 -08:00
