diff --git a/conservancy/supporters/templates/supporters/sustainers_stripe.html b/conservancy/supporters/templates/supporters/sustainers_stripe.html
index 68a52ac8..7cce2593 100644
--- a/conservancy/supporters/templates/supporters/sustainers_stripe.html
+++ b/conservancy/supporters/templates/supporters/sustainers_stripe.html
@@ -38,11 +38,13 @@
     <section class="mb4">
       <noscript>
         <div style="padding: 1rem; border: 2px solid #0f0; margin-bottom: 1.5rem">
-          <p><marquee><strong>Hey there!</strong></marquee> Thanks for visiting our site <strong>without JavaScript</strong>! We respect your choice and make a significant effort to ensure our site works without JavaScript or, where necessary, to use only free software JavaScript.</p>
+          <p><marquee><strong>Hey there!</strong></marquee> Thanks for visiting our site <strong>without JavaScript</strong>!</p>
 
-          <p>The bad news is that our credit card/ACH payment services <strong>Stripe and PayPal don't work without JavaScript</strong>. We also don't currently have the resources to handle PCI compliant credit-card processing directly.</p>
+          <p>We do our best to ensure our site works without JavaScript or, where necessary, to use only free software JavaScript.</p>
 
-          <p>We'd still love to have you as a Sustainer though, and will gladly accept your payment by <a href="#wire-transfer">wire transfer</a> or <a href="#paper-check">paper check</a> . If those aren't feasible, please <a href="mailto:donate@sfconservancy.org">get in touch</a> and we'll try to work something out. Thanks for your support!</p>
+          <p>The bad news is that all credit card/ACH payment services that are available to us, like Stripe and PayPal, <strong>don't work without JavaScript</strong>. We also don't currently have the resources to handle PCI compliant credit-card processing directly.</p>
+
+          <p>You can still become a Sustainer by making a payment by <a href="#wire-transfer">wire transfer</a> or <a href="#paper-check">paper check</a>. If those aren't feasible, please <a href="mailto:donate@sfconservancy.org">get in touch</a> and we'll try to work something out. Thanks for your support! And we think you are very cool!</p>
 
           <img src="{% static 'img/dancing-banana.gif' %}" alt="Dancing Banana">
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