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		|  | @ -87,7 +87,7 @@ Software Freedom Conservancy has had a lot of major successes this year: | |||
| Conservancy: <a href="http://sfconservancy.org/news/2015/jul/23/qemu-joins/">QEMU</a>, | ||||
|   the generic machine emulator and | ||||
| virtualizer, <a href="https://www.bro.org/">The Bro Network Security | ||||
| Monitor</a>, the Godot Game Engine[FIXME] | ||||
| Monitor</a>, the <a href="http://www.godotengine.org/">Godot Game Engine</a>, | ||||
| and <a href="http://outreachy.org">Outreachy</a>, a program dedicated to | ||||
| helping people from underrepresented groups get involved in free and open | ||||
| source software. We also worked with the Debian community to launch | ||||
|  | @ -114,7 +114,7 @@ into Korean</a> [and Chinese].</li> | |||
| 
 | ||||
| <li>Along with FSF, we | ||||
| helped <a href="http://sfconservancy.org/news/2015/jul/15/ubuntu-ip-policy/">Canonical, | ||||
| Ltd. achieve compliance in its “Intellectual Property” Policy</a>, while | ||||
| Ltd. achieve compliance in its "Intellectual Property" Policy</a>, while | ||||
| pointing out that the policy fails to address important software freedom | ||||
| issues.</li> | ||||
| 
 | ||||
|  | @ -144,7 +144,7 @@ firmware in wireless devices. | |||
|    | ||||
| <li>We gave keynotes | ||||
| at <a href="https://sfconservancy.org/blog/2015/aug/17/debian/">DebConf</a>, <a href="https://archive.fosdem.org/2015/schedule/event/identity_crisis/">FOSDEM</a>, <a href="https://sfconservancy.org/blog/2015/jul/14/FISL16/">FISL</>, <a href="https://sfconservancy.org/news/2015/mar/31/libreplanet/">LibrePlanet</a>, <a href="https://sfconservancy.org/blog/2015/sep/30/linaro-keynote/">Linaro | ||||
| Connect</> and participated in many conferences more all over the world, and | ||||
| Connect</a>, and participated in many conferences more all over the world; we also  | ||||
| shared our expertise in initiatives | ||||
| like <a href="https://copyleft.org/">copyleft.org</a>. We participated in | ||||
| interviews and <a href="https://sfconservancy.org/blog/">blogposts</a>, and | ||||
|  | @ -170,7 +170,7 @@ future of technology. We do them because they are right. <b>But we cannot do | |||
| them without you</b>. If we do not meet our fundraising goals, we will be | ||||
| forced to radically restructure.</p> | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| <p>Our fiscal sponsorship model is not financially self sustaining. We cannot | ||||
| <p>Our fiscal sponsorship model is not financially self-sustaining by itself:  we cannot | ||||
| afford even one staff member and basic overhead with the revenue we take in | ||||
| from our projects. In order to effectively continue to serve our member | ||||
| projects, we need [750] Supporters. If you use or care about | ||||
|  | @ -182,9 +182,9 @@ Supporter today</a>.</p> | |||
| <h4>Fighting for the GPL<h4> | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| <p>Many consider our GPL compliance and enforcement controversial.   We don't | ||||
| think it is: We stand up for | ||||
| the GPL at the request of the Linux kernel community, the Debian community | ||||
| and our member projects. Most recently that has resulted in our funding | ||||
| think it is:  we stand up for | ||||
| the GPL at the request of the Linux kernel community, the Debian community,  | ||||
| and our member projects. Most recently, that has resulted in our funding | ||||
| of the <a href="http://sfconservancy.org/news/2015/mar/05/vmware-lawsuit/">suit | ||||
| against VMware</a>, which is the first lawsuit on derivative works and the | ||||
| GPL. While this work is extremely important to the continued long-term | ||||
|  | @ -195,14 +195,14 @@ reluctant to fund organizations that take on this enforcement task. Some compani | |||
| have withdrawn from funding us and some have even successfully pressured  | ||||
| conferences to cancel or prevent talks on our enforcement work. We do | ||||
| this work because we think that it is good for everyone in the long run, | ||||
| because we know it is the right thing to do and because we know that we are | ||||
| because we know it is the right thing to do, and because we know that we are | ||||
| in the best position to do it. But that's not enough — you have to think it's | ||||
| right too and <a href="https://sfconservancy.org/supporter/">show us by | ||||
| becoming a Supporter now</a>.</p> | ||||
|   | ||||
| <h4>It's up to you</h4> | ||||
| 
 | ||||
| <p>We have raised enough money to continue the VMware case but our overall | ||||
| <p>We have raised enough money to continue the VMware case, but our overall | ||||
| enforcement work needs additional support to be able to continue.  As we | ||||
| state in | ||||
| the <a href="https://sfconservancy.org/linux-compliance/principles.html">Principles | ||||
|  |  | |||
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