From 7827b42ec175b3df4207f7b7a3640fd34f92d643 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Bradley M. Kuhn" <bkuhn@sfconservancy.org>
Date: Fri, 15 Aug 2025 13:38:58 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Incorporate comments from Denver made in chat

---
 conservancy/content/GiveUpGitHub/index.html | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/conservancy/content/GiveUpGitHub/index.html b/conservancy/content/GiveUpGitHub/index.html
index ba18798f..53ad817e 100644
--- a/conservancy/content/GiveUpGitHub/index.html
+++ b/conservancy/content/GiveUpGitHub/index.html
@@ -43,19 +43,19 @@ the most important ones:
     <ul>
     <li><p>Microsoft has escalated the incorporation of its for-profit
     <a href="https://github.com/features/copilot" rel="nofollow">Copilot
-    product</a>.  The CoPilot bannernow incorporates many different, proprietary,
+    product</a>.  The Copilot banner now incorporates many different, proprietary,
       so-called &ldquo;Artificial Intelligence&rdquo; (<abbr>AI</abbr>)
-    products.  However, the first CoPilot product was designed
+    products.  However, the first Copilot product was designed
     to automatically generate code interactively for developers, and that
     feature is still pushed on GitHub users.
-    CoPilot's AI model was trained
+    Copilot's AI model was trained
     (<a href="https://github.blog/2021-06-30-github-copilot-research-recitation/"
     rel="nofollow">according to GitHub's own statements</a>) exclusively with
     projects that were hosted on GitHub, including many licensed
     under <a href="https://sfconservancy.org/copyleft-compliance/glossary.html#copyleft">copyleft</a>
     licenses.  (Microsoft even admits that there was one document that they
     encountered (and ignored) <q>a whopping 700,000 different times during
-    training &mdash: &hellip; the GNU General Public License</q>.</p>
+    training &mdash; &hellip; the GNU General Public License</q>.</p>
  
     <p>Most of those projects are not in the &ldquo;public
     domain&rdquo;, they are licensed
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ the most important ones:
         of creating proprietary software are grave.</p> </li>
 
 <li>Along with the crescendo of &ldquo;AI&rdquo; ballyhoo, Microsoft has rolled out more
-  products that include these technologies into GitHub.  Microsoft's CoPilot
+  products that include these technologies into GitHub.  Microsoft's Copilot
   is <a href="https://mastodon.social/@glyph/114995950245874315">now
   generating issues and pull requests and GitHub users <strong>cannot opt
   out</strong></a>.  This use is unconscionable and is reason enough alone
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ complaints about GitLab's business model of parallel &ldquo;Community&rdquo;
 and &ldquo;Enterprise&rdquo; editions, at least GitLab's Community Edition
 provides basic functionality for self-hosting and is 100% FOSS. Meanwhile,
     there are <em>non-profit</em> FOSS hosting sites such
-as <a href="https://codeberg.org">CodeBerg</a>, who develop their platform
+as <a href="https://codeberg.org">Codeberg</a>, who develop their platform
     publicly as FOSS.</p></li>
 
 <li><p>GitHub has long sought to discredit copyleft generally.  Their various
@@ -204,14 +204,14 @@ the <a href="https://lists.sfconservancy.org/mailman/listinfo/give-up-github">Gi
 
 <p>Our primary recommendation at this time for self-hosting
   is <a href="https://forgejo.org/">Forgejo</a>, and if you would like a
-  hosted service, we recommend <a href="https://codeberg.org">CodeBerg</a>
+  hosted service, we recommend <a href="https://codeberg.org">Codeberg</a>
   (which is built on Forgejo).  Below we include a list of various options
   for both third-party hosting and self-hosting:</p>
 
 <ul>
 <li>Alternative Hosting Services:
     <ul>
-    <li><a href="https://codeberg.org">CodeBerg</a></li>
+    <li><a href="https://codeberg.org">Codeberg</a></li>
     <li><a href="https://sourcehut.org/">SourceHut</a></li>
     </ul>
  <li>Self-Host (or join a group that self-hosts).  A few options:
@@ -234,8 +234,8 @@ the <a href="https://lists.sfconservancy.org/mailman/listinfo/give-up-github">Gi
   URL widely, along with
   the <a href="https://sfconservancy.org/img/GiveUpGitHub.svg">GiveUpGitHub
   logo</a> on public platforms like
-  the <a href="https://fedi.copyleft.org/@bkuhn/115011409937801978">fediverse
-  / Mastodon</a>.</p>
+  the <a href="https://floss.social/@downey/110657456122551808">fediverse
+  / Mastodon</a> &mdash; using the hashtag #GiveUpGitHub.</p>
 
 
 <p>Second, you can also raise the importance of this issue