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|   infrastructure for FLOSS projects.  This allows FLOSS developers to |   infrastructure for FLOSS projects.  This allows FLOSS developers to | ||||||
|   focus on what they do best — writing and improving FLOSS for the |   focus on what they do best — writing and improving FLOSS for the | ||||||
|   general public — while Conservancy takes care of the projects' needs that |   general public — while Conservancy takes care of the projects' needs that | ||||||
|   do not relate directly to software development.</p> |   do not relate directly to software development and documentation.</p> | ||||||
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| <p>FLOSS projects whose <a href="/members/apply">applications are | <p>FLOSS projects whose <a href="/members/apply">applications are | ||||||
|     accepted</a> become an actual part of the Software Freedom Conservancy |     accepted</a> become part of the Software Freedom Conservancy | ||||||
|     (akin to a separate department of a large agency).  Once joined, the |     (akin to a separate department of a large agency).  Once joined, the | ||||||
|     <a href="/members">“member project”</a> receives most of |     <a href="/members">“member project”</a> receives most of | ||||||
|     the benefits of existing as a non-profit corporate entity without |     the benefits of existing as a non-profit corporate entity without | ||||||
|     actually having to form and maintain one.  Conservancy aggregates the |     engaging in the arduous work of forming a separate, new organization. | ||||||
|     work of running a FLOSS non-profit for <a href="/members/current/">its |     Conservancy aggregates the work of running a FLOSS non-profit | ||||||
|     many members</a>.</p> |     for <a href="/members/current/">its many members</a>.</p> | ||||||
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| <p>The Conservancy provides <a href="/members/services/">many important services</a> for its | <p>The Conservancy provides <a href="/members/services/">many important services</a> for its | ||||||
|   member projects.  Member projects can take directed donations, which |   member projects.  Member projects can take directed donations, which | ||||||
|   allows donors to earmark their donations for the benefit of a specific |   allows donors to earmark their donations for the benefit of a specific | ||||||
|   FLOSS project.  Conservancy provides fiscal oversight to ensure that |   FLOSS project.  Conservancy provides fiscal oversight to ensure that | ||||||
|   these funds are spent in a manner that advances the project and fits |   these funds are spent in a manner that advances the project and fits | ||||||
|   with Conservancy's 501(c)(3) mission to advance software freedom.</p> |   with Conservancy's 501(c)(3) mission to promote, advance, and defend software freedom.</p> | ||||||
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| <p>If the member project's leaders want, Conservancy can also hold other | <p>If the member project's leaders want, Conservancy can also hold other | ||||||
|   assets and titles on behalf of the projects, such as copyrights, |   assets and titles on behalf of the projects, such as copyrights, | ||||||
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|   in enforcing the terms of the projects' FLOSS license.</p> |   in enforcing the terms of the projects' FLOSS license.</p> | ||||||
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| <p>Finally, developers of Conservancy's member projects, when operating in | <p>Finally, developers of Conservancy's member projects, when operating in | ||||||
|   their capacity as project leaders, receive some protection from personal |   their capacity as project leaders, could receive some protection from personal | ||||||
|   liability for their work on the project.</p> |   liability for their work on the project.</p> | ||||||
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| <p>For further reading on the benefits of Conservancy, a full and detailed <a href="/members/services/">list of Conservancy's | <p>For further reading on the benefits of Conservancy, a full and detailed <a href="/members/services/">list of Conservancy's | ||||||
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