From 3772e91d8d6fcf43cb9723fb60250010914c744d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Bradley M. Kuhn" <bkuhn@sfconservancy.org>
Date: Sat, 26 Jul 2025 13:59:30 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Tighten language, mainly to make it look better on front page

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diff --git a/conservancy/templates/frontpage.html b/conservancy/templates/frontpage.html
index 1dc90598..04fc033a 100644
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@@ -37,9 +37,8 @@ strategies that defend FOSS (such as copyleft). <a href="/about" class="orange">
   </section>
   <section class="w-30-ns mh2 pa3 bg-light-blue ba b--gray">
     <h2 class="f4 ttu">Vizio Trial This September!</h2>
-    <p>SFC's historic <a href="/vizio">lawsuit against Vizio</a> for their
-      violations of the GPLv2 &amp; LGPLv2.1 goes to trial starting MON
-      2025-09-22.  Would you like an opportunity to attend the trial as an
+    <p>On <strong>MON 2025-09-22, the trial begins</strong> in SFC's historic <a href="/vizio">lawsuit against Vizio</a> for their
+      violations of GPLv2 &amp; LGPLv2.1.  Would you like to attend the trial as an
       observer?  <a href="https://sfconservancy.org/news/2025/jul/24/travel-grants-for-vizio-trial-to-foss-community/">Apply
       for a travel grant today!</a>
   </section>